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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @christlover @steward-of-the-pen Then it’s settled. I think it’s a great idea to have two topics and limit the group one to only about 10 participants (at least at one time).
@anne_the_noob14 Do you mind if I ask you to be my second-in-command on the topic in the fantasy writers group? You seem to be pretty active on the forum…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@evelyn I applied for a job at the library as a circulation assistant. It’s a part-time job with only a few hours a week, but at least it’s a start. Working at the library would be a really cool opportunity since I love books so much.
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Ariella Newheart posted an update 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Here’s the link to my book, Ashen Blaze! Thank you so much for beta-reading! <3
Again, the deadline is May 8th.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lzSmMZq02D1qUEzI9vGK8YnZ8InSIs0RkbVCz58g0dA/edit?usp=sharing
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 I will set the deadline for May 8th, in exactly two months. Does that sound okay? And yeah, you’ll have commenting power! Feel free to use it as much as you deem fit. I’ll send you the link promptly. Thank you sooo much!
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 I would be glad to have you as a beta-reader! Thank you for volunteering. I need all the input I can get on this story. How ’bout I give you a link in a public message? 😀
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Yes, I did mean exchange current characters for new ones. 🙂
If you’d like to move it to the fantasy writers group, I say we go for it. My concern, however, is that a lot of people might want to join (it being a large group), and things will get crazy and confusing. I’m still willing to try. If you think I should, I’ll rewrite…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Hello! Thanks for checking in! I don’t want Parimi Alca to die entirely. *dunks cookie in tea and munches happily*
My writing has been slow, but I’m preparing my first book to publish this summer by recruiting a few final beta-readers, drawing a map, compiling a glossary, and doing some other technical things. I also started a…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 I would love to help revive it! I don’t know exactly how to start off, but I think I could write a continuation of someone’s post. Maybe it’s time for Caedon to go home, too. He’s been here for an awfully long time. I’ll consider who to bring in next, if we do revive this topic. 😉
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Beta readers for my novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@nuetrobolt Your synopsis has drawn me in! I would love to beta-read, but I don’t know if I could dedicate a huge amount of time to it until Spring Break in April. If that changes, I’ll let you know. 🙂
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Critique for my poem "The Sky Realm" in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
(Though I actually like the word ‘crowing’ there, as a reference to the pridefulness we too often indulge.)
That’s a good thought! I experimented with different ways to give it that effect, but eventually decided to leave it the way it was. Thank you for the idea and for taking the time to read my poem!
@cassie-hartfinh Thank you, Cas…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Critique for my poem "The Sky Realm" in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@elisha-starquill Thank you for pointing out that little typo. That would’ve been embarrassing! xD
@abigail-rebekah @evelyn Thanks for taking the time to read it. It’s really encouraging to hear that you like it. 🙂
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Ariella Newheart started the topic Critique for my poem "The Sky Realm" in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
Greetings, fellow poets and writers! My school is having a poetry competition and I would love to enter a poem I wrote called “The Sky Realm.” If you have a chance, I would greatly appreciate thoughts and critiques. The deadline is in about two weeks. 🙂 Thank you!
The Sky Realm
Have you ever mapped the endless sky,
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Ariella Newheart joined the group Poets 5 years ago
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Ariella Newheart joined the group Sci-fi Writers 5 years ago
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Ariella Newheart joined the group Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic An Important Change to My Book in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@elisha-starquill @steward-of-the-pen @april-j-rhys
Hey, all! I finally finished editing the flashback chapters into my book. (They are now chapters 2 and 4, with transition paragraphs in the preceding chapters that I am quite proud of.) If you guys have the time to look it over and give me your thoughts, that would be much appreciated! If you…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@anne_the_noob14 Yes, high school midterms. *thumbs up*
@elisha-starquill Are you able to write Racleva’s response to Caedon’s last question?
@christlover Oh wow. I like Theseus’ reactions to everything Caedon and Vladlena were saying. xD Especially the part about the space alien. Just a side note, the characters can’t actually leave the castle.…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Flash Fiction in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@elisha-starquill The Mandalorian is a show based in the Star Wars universe. So far it’s only available on Disney+, which I don’t have. I’ve only seen a few episodes at a friend’s house, but I like what I’ve seen so far. 😛
I loved your story, by the way! The settings and the characters really intrigued me. Two things, though. I kinda wish you’d…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Flash Fiction in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@elisha-starquill This is a great idea! I had way more fun writing this prompt than I thought I would. (Probably because it struck me as being in a sort of Victorian/steampunk era, and I love writing that genre.) Reading over it again, I suspect I might have been influenced a little by the Mandalorian. 😛
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A thief finds a note in a wallet…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@anne_the_noob14 @elisha-starquill @steward-of-the-pen
Sorry I’ve been gone, guys! I have midterms next week, but I might be able to write over Christmas break. 😀
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