Story Embers | Allison Grace | Favorites https://storyembers.org/members/allison-grace/activity/favorites/ Activity feed of Allison Grace's favorites. Sat, 27 Jun 2026 13:26:05 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 e5a79dd546854e47e2077b815dde802c WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic "Bloody Hands" in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/18681/ Sun, 23 Sep 2018 22:46:42 -0400 @allison-grace I’ve read some of it; I’m liking it so far! It’s intriguing…. :} 😀

]]> 0 13b03abf56d06265cd234d08bfdddf0e Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Fantasy prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/5911/ Wed, 23 May 2018 21:55:53 -0400 @allison-grace oooh, I really liked it! The pacing was quick and the entire prologue grabbed my attention. The length was perfect too.

Besides what @sarah-inkdragon said, here are my thoughts:

– the POV was a little confusing. I had a feeling it was from Joshua’s POV, but at the start, it felt omniscient (or all-seeing), and the transition was a…[Read more]

]]> 0 6580935d4756c93f9561829b17763b45 Sarah Inkdragon replied to the topic Fantasy prologue in the forum Critiques https://storyembers.org/activity/p/5810/ Wed, 23 May 2018 04:07:01 -0400 @allison-grace

So, here are my main points about your prologue:

  • Length/Pacing:

It’s quite long, but the story doesn’t drag down in any places or become repetitive. In fact, I would say for what you’ve written, the length is nearly perfect, and along with your excellent pacing, it holds up nicely.

  • Prose:

I like your prose. While it doesn’t…[Read more]

]]> 0 2a8b3ce42c5427ccb6be0f2454dde19b WarrenLuther04 posted an update: @allison-grace KANAN!!!!! *tears up* Hey, Spectre Seven! Your […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/2621/ Mon, 30 Apr 2018 02:37:40 -0400 @allison-grace KANAN!!!!! *tears up* Hey, Spectre Seven! Your friendly neighborhood Mando ENFJ-T golden retriever here!

How’s KP and SE been while I’ve been gone?

]]> 4 4f171359b96b9700ee2d5f4937ca0e8e Sam Kowal replied to the topic Hello all! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/1992/ Thu, 26 Apr 2018 00:07:13 -0400 @allison-grace 😀 Somehow there needs to be a hollow lightsaber. And it goes inside your flute. And then when stormtroopers invade your music practice, *bam* you have a glowing lightsaber.

😀 Welcome to Story Embers, and great to have you here! The premise/synopsis of your novel sounds really interesting. Avendor is a great name

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