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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 day, 23 hours ago
asdfghjkl that made me think of that one audio XD that perfectly applies to Cal LOLL!!!
(“A girl doesn’t dye her hair that color unless she has psychological problems.” “My hair color has nothing to do with my psychological problems!!!”)
Oooh you just gave me an idea😂😂
Lorcan
Lorcan had a good feeling that Cal and the o…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days ago
Enydd is being ridiculously stubborn with me, revealing she has a different side to her but refusing to show it to me. Because of her refusal to cooperate, her narrative may seem out of character at times.
LOLL, don’t you love when they get like that XD Well, it’s usually a sign of development!
That bit you wrote for…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 3 hours ago
sorry, didn’t see your post until after I posted mine. I had my two in the back of the room previously, so I decided to pick up where I had left off… hope it works. I can have Abirami interact with you in my next post… after people’s reactions… I’m gonna have Abirami try to corral everyone out of the room… =)
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 3 hours ago
Ku
(essence is the “magical system” of my fantasy world. It’s based off of Plato’s true forms, if knows what that is. =) )
Pitch blackness.
“No.” No way could I be alone.
I stretched out my essence, seeking for some living creature. Surely, I would find one. Even as a street urchin, I was never really alone. Every square inch of earth hous…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 3 hours ago
@jared-williams Kit and Valencia are free if you’d like to start an interaction between them and Ku/Abirami!
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 3 hours ago
Valencia:
The last of the street lights flicker on, scattering the inky shadows on the damp sidewalk. The sickly yellow glow flashes across Kit’s keys as they twirl around his finger, flickering in and out of his hand to the beat of some inaudible tune. My chest tightens as the keys slip just beneath his fingertips. Just five minutes be…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 5 hours ago
WOW! Things are moving fast! I was going to write something yesterday, but then another page of writing appeared!
So…. before the large break in the castle, I had Ku’Aya (nicknamed Ku) and Abirami. Ku calls him Ami, but Abirami hates that nickname. Ku is a 14yr. old Aelacrin girl, and Abirami is an 18 year old Aygiff boy. Aelacrin’s are green…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 7 hours ago
Rosemary turned toward the sound of Miss Painted Face and Alaric’s conversation. Jade reluctantly turned with her.
”I’ve never seen so many strangers in my life,” said Rosemary.
”We’ve never seen any, you mean, until now.” Jade braced herself for another conversation with the princeling brat, now with the added benefit of — another dancer! O…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 7 hours ago
🙂 And I also want to thank you for your review of my dystopian plot idea. It was very helpful. 🙂 (One can never use too many smiley face emojis XD)
ENYDD
A man (How old is Avin? I’m guessing mid- thirties to early forties) moved towards me as one would towards a frightened animal. My lips quirked upward. I must look terrified.…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 8 hours ago
“Failure to accept your fatal flaws shall end in death. Touch the mirrors and begin your trials.”
Uhhhhhh … what made the mirror’s special?
How are mirrors related to fatal flaws?
What trials?
“So, who wants to go first?” comes a strange voice I hadn’t heard yet – yet being defined as ‘since I fell through the first hole in reality.’
Pu…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 8 hours ago
Avin
He relaxed. They were all talking to someone else now. He glanced around the room. There wasn’t much to see; just a cave, with a chandelier in it. He frowned. That didn’t make sense, but nothing here did.
He caught sight of a movement along the wall: there was a girl there, barely old enough to be called a woman. She clung to the shadows,…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 9 hours ago
*waves shyly* Hi everybody!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 9 hours ago
Nithel was just… so done. He put two fingers on his forehead and stared at the three mirrors.
Accept your unforgiveness and vengefulness.
Accept your anger and wrath.
Accept your greed and selfishness.
The first and last caused no fear in him. None at all. The second did… as he thought of times in battle where uncontrollable rage had…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 10 hours ago
@emily-waldorf 😂 If Rosemary sees Alaric’s hands, she’s going to demand medical supplies.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 10 hours ago
Alaric
“And just who do you think you are?” Jade said, hands on her hips. “Maybe you could learn to hold your own tongue, but I think your position is irrecoverable. Get yourself out of the glass if you can, princeling. I think you’ll find that your authority is nothing in this place.”
She spun on her heel and stalked off, leaving Alaric standin…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 11 hours ago
Enydd is being ridiculously stubborn with me, revealing she has a different side to her but refusing to show it to me. Because of her refusal to cooperate, her narrative may seem out of character at times.
ENYDD:
There were voices coming from further down the room. New voices. I groaned. Wonderful. This meant that there were probably more…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 12 hours ago
@emily-waldorf Yep. Permanently damaged. 😂 You did good at writing Jade, too.
Jade glared at the well-dressed brat. The price of his clothes would support an entire tenement of Culled for a month. “And just who do you think you are?” she said, hands on her hips. “Maybe you could learn to hold your own tongue, but I think your position is irr…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 15 hours ago
Lorcan knew from the moment he laid eyes on her brightly coloured hair and scowl that she was going to be a problem.
asdfghjkl that made me think of that one audio XD that perfectly applies to Cal LOLL!!!
(“A girl doesn’t dye her hair that color unless she has psychological problems.” “My hair color has nothing to do…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 15 hours ago
Alaric
Back and forth, back and forth, over the same stones he always paced over. “…in the third year of his reign, the Southern Duchies produced a total of $17,000 quids, the largest recorded gross income to date.”
The light was getting bad. He squinted at the page. The servants would be in soon to light the chandeliers.
“In the same year,…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 15 hours ago
Oh she is RUTHLESS. I’m looking forward to this XD
Lorcan
Someone cleared their throat behind Lorcan. He turned to see yet another girl , her hair dyed a bright indigo glaring up at him. Lorcan knew from the moment he laid eyes on her brightly coloured hair and scowl that she was going to be a problem. “I’m Cal. I don…[Read more]
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