fb

Fantasy Writers

Character Castle

Viewing 15 posts - 106 through 120 (of 1,171 total)
  • Author
    Posts
  • #112169
    claire
    @claire-h

    @kristianne-hassman

    Yes, same here! I’ve also been having this issue with a lot of other threads as well… I tagged Daeus on one.

    a flower does not think of competing with the flower next to it.
    it just blooms.

    #112194
    Kristianne
    @kristianne-hassman

    @claire-h

    Hmm, that’s strange. I’m glad I’m not the only one having problems! Hopefully Daeus will be able to help us

    Courage, dear heart.

    #112716
    Kristianne
    @kristianne-hassman

    @everyone

    Has anyone gotten Daeus to try to figure out how to fix the glitch? Or is anyone able to see the other pages yet?

    I can’t write the next part of my character interaction until I can see what I’ve written.

    Courage, dear heart.

    #112897
    Rusted Knight
    @rusted-knight

    The glitch seems gone so hope back in the water. Its just right. Anyway here the bio to one of my guys

    Isaac. Born in 21xx (will the decide later if at all). Time traveling assassin. Stuck in WWII after the machine overheated and blew up. His goal is to change history so that Communism dies out with Nazism. Along the way he will fall from faith and then return again. He is silent and cuts himself off from others unless necessary.

    Isaac pulled the trench cloak closed. The dark alley was foggy. Reverberating off the walls were German commands and yell. The SS guards were more common than normal. Stowing his Mauser C96 into his chest holster, Isaac jumped out into the street. In five quick moves, the trench coat was turned inside out and the hat was thrown to the ground. Buttoning up, Isaac assumed a casual air. Now all he had to do was get out of Dresden before the bombing started.

    If it was tonight. He couldn’t remember. The migraine that came with the changing memories was not worth it now.

    His head began to swim and his stomach turned. Isaac reach for his gun but stopped himself. He had not been shot again. There was not stabbing pain. Turning back, he realized the whole area had changed. He was in a stone room, lit by a single candle on a table. On both sides were bookshelves. Across from him was a door and on the other side was talking.

    Leaping toward the shadows, Isaac threw a knife at the candle extinguishing it. Tipping a book on its side, he rested the heavy Mauser on it and waited. Should the people prove to be dangerous, he would fire.

    The Devil saw me with my head down and got excited. Then I said Amen

    #112917
    Rusted Knight
    @rusted-knight

    say what style of hilt does Dharin have? My guy will observe and act according to what he sees.

    The Devil saw me with my head down and got excited. Then I said Amen

    #113114
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    Ok so it’s not showing that I’ve posted?? I’ve tried twice now. This is a test run post I guess.

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #113115
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    Ok so that worked. Hm…

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #113116
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    Maybe it doesn’t like the link?

    Let’s try again…


    @rusted-knight

    Ooo, Isaac sounds interesting! And I love his introduction!

    Um, about Dharin’s hilt… Of a rather Italian style like this, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Rapiere-Negative0-19-19(1).jpg , but not the same, since his world doesn’t follow our styles exactly, and his was probably custom-made and with added… *waves hands around vaguely* …added stuff. But probably relatively close to that one there, if one was to categorize the swords in his world into our styles.

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #113117
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    There we go!


    @claire-h
      @kristianne-hassman @beth20 @ariella-newheart @everyoneelse

    We’re all good again, y’all! 😀

    I’ll try to write something soon…

    • This reply was modified 4 years, 6 months ago by Livi Ryddle. Reason: got a tag wrong

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #113126
    Tal
    @tal

    I’m interested in joining this…whatever this is, can someone explain how it works?

    “Always believe everything you see on the internet.”
    -Abraham Lincoln

    #113259
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    Awesome that it’s back and good!!! Yah!! @claire-h Love your new profile pic!!


    @rusted-knight
    I like Isaac!! Also, love your quote!!


    @tal
    So basically you just bring one of your characters and introduce him. Then he interacts with the castle or just one of the other characters! You just write what he does then the other person will respond with their character! I hope that helps!

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

    #113262
    Tal
    @tal

    @beth20

    Yes, that helps. I’ll bring someone in soon.

    “Always believe everything you see on the internet.”
    -Abraham Lincoln

    #113441
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    @beth20 Yes!!


    @rusted-knight

    Oh wow! Just now read your forum signature after Beth commented on it. I love it too!!

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #113442
    Livi Ryddle
    @anne_the_noob14

    @tal Welcome! 😀

    “Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"

    #113510
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

    @tal

    Yes you should!

    Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

Viewing 15 posts - 106 through 120 (of 1,171 total)
  • The forum ‘Private: Fantasy Writers’ is closed to new topics and replies.

Enroll in Our Seven-Day Mindset Challenge Course

Enter your email to begin taking the course. We'll send you a link to begin the mindset course along with emails to help you grow in your writing craft!

You've joined the course! Check your email to watch the first video.

Stop Using Meaningless Character Questionnaires

Knowing your character's favorite ice cream flavor won't help you write engaging protagonists.

 

Our questionnaire is different. Use it to discover your character's core fears, longings, hopes, and needs.

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the character questionnaire in one moment...

Craft Moving Themes Without Turning Readers Off

Craft Moving Themes Without Turning Readers Off

Want to impact the world for Christ with your writing—without being preachy or cliched?

 

Learn how to avoid common pitfalls and craft powerful themes by downloading our free worksheet!

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the theme worksheet in one moment...

Take Your Style to the Next Level

Take Your Style to the Next Level

The written word matters to God.

 

Does it matter to you?

 

Learn how to develop an eloquent, practical, and personal style by downloading our free e-book.

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the eBook in one moment...

Every Year, Thousands of Writers Give Up

Every Year, Thousands of Writers Give Up

 Don’t be the next.

 

We understand how exhausting writing can be, so download our free e-book and find inspiration to press on!

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the eBook in one moment...

So You Have Clichés in Your Novel...

Thankfully, we’re here to help!

 

Enter your email below, and we’ll send you a simple process for smashing clichés.

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the cliche worksheet in one moment...

Sign Up for Updates

Enter your email to receive updates on the 2025 Summit, along with emails to help you grow in your writing craft!

You have successfully subscribed for updates!

Craft Moving Themes Without Turning Readers Off

Craft Moving Themes Without Turning Readers Off

Want to impact the world for Christ with your writing—without being preachy or cliched?

 

Learn how to avoid common pitfalls and craft powerful themes by downloading our free worksheet!

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the theme worksheet in one moment...

Poetry Isn't Just for Poets

Poetry Isn't Just for Poets

It can also help novelists write better stories!

Get our Harnessing the Power of Poetry e-book to learn how techniques used by skilled poets can enrich your storytelling.

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the eBook in one moment...

Craft Moving Themes Without Turning Readers Off

Craft Moving Themes Without Turning Readers Off

Want to impact the world for Christ with your writing—without being preachy or cliched?

 

 

Learn how to avoid common pitfalls and craft powerful themes by downloading our free worksheet!

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the theme worksheet in one moment...

Uncover the Secret to Relatable Characters

Uncover the Secret to Relatable Characters

Learning how to help readers connect with your story's characters doesn't need to be a mystery.

Get our Evoking Reader Empathy e-book to discover how successful authors build empathy.

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the eBook in one moment...

Stop Using Meaningless Character Questionnaires

Stop Using Meaningless Character Questionnaires

Knowing your character's favorite ice cream flavor won't help you write engaging protagonists.

 

Our questionnaire is different. Use it to discover your character's core fears, longings, hopes, and needs.

 

 

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the character questionnaire in one moment...

Plotting Is Hard

Plotting Is Hard

That’s why we created a worksheet that will help you make sure your story hits all the right plot beats.

 

Sign up below to learn how to ace story structure.

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the plot sheet in one moment...

Learn What the Bible Says about Engaging Plots

Learn What the Bible Says about Engaging Plots

Enter your email to get your guide, along with other resources to help you grow in your writing craft!

You have successfully subscribed for updates!

Learn How to Write Christian Themes that Resonate

Enter your email to get the worksheet, along with other resources to help you grow in your writing craft!

Congratulations! Redirecting you to the theme worksheet in one moment...

Get Free Writing Resources

Sign up below to gain immediate access to over a dozen ebooks, story worksheets, and action step guides.

You have successfully subscribed for updates!

Register for the Panel Discussion

Enter your email to claim your free spot at the live event!

You have successfully subscribed for updates!

Register for the Panel Discussion

Enter your email to claim your free spot at the live event!

You have successfully subscribed for updates!

Pin It on Pinterest