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  • #119195
    Beth Darlene
    @beth20

      @kimlikesart and @bigideaskc

      “Uh… hello? Guys? Anyone?” Jaylin shouted. He didn’t know where he was. He continued to walk down the stone tunnel. Where the heck are all the others?

      “Hellooo?” He tried again. When no one answered, he started to panic. By himself in a creepy tunnel was not what he wanted.

      “Allo– Erm… Hello?” Someone shouted back.

      His heart leapt. I’m not alone after all! He wondered who it was. Definitely a girl, but which of the other girls had accents like that? He headed in the direction of the voice.

      “Is anyone there?” The girl called again.

      “Uh… yeah?” He stopped walking. There in front of him was the owner of the voice he had heard.

      “It is nice to finally meet you face-to-face.” She said.

      He smiled. But before he could say anything she asked, “And your name is?”

      “Um yeah, it’s Jaylin. What about yours?”

      Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉

      #119197
      Livi Ryddle
      @anne_the_noob14

      Oh yeah, one more thing!

      (I think it’s @joelle-stone ?? Maybe?? Is that the right tag?)

      I said this at the end of what I just wrote over in the chronicles, but I’ll be back later tonight to write what Dharin tells Lytt about him and his sister. Lytt can either interrupt him right there and say whatever, or if you wanna wait for Dharin to finish, that’s also cool. Doesn’t matter to me 🙂 Just whatever you wanna do!

      "Reck not."
      ~Sir Nicholas Beauvallet

      #119198
      Gracie
      @kimlikesart

        @anne_the_noob14 You’re back!!!! Hey!

        (Yes, school is quite busy…)

        Jominkreesa

        Passion means to be willing to suffer.

        #119199
        Livi Ryddle
        @anne_the_noob14

        @kimlikesart I am!!! It’s good to be back lol. Even if it’s only for a little while XD

        "Reck not."
        ~Sir Nicholas Beauvallet

        #119200
        Gracie
        @kimlikesart

          @anne_the_noob14

          Question: (I just read what you wrote, quite good by the way) But, what about the pit? Are you (Dharin/Lytt) to warn of the hole none of them (trio, two-thirds of which untrustworthy) noticed?

          Just an idea/question… *confused look*

          Teagen was pretty good too. (He is the lowest in the hierarchy at the moment…no doubt about that and messenger boy fits…)

          Jominkreesa

          Passion means to be willing to suffer.

          #119201
          Gracie
          @kimlikesart

            (you did good too @beth20 ) Just thought I’d say so. (:

            Jominkreesa

            Passion means to be willing to suffer.

            #119203
            Livi Ryddle
            @anne_the_noob14

            @kimlikesart

            I wasn’t actually sure if there was or wasn’t a hole… something someone else had said made me think there wasn’t, but then somebody mentioned a hole… so I guess I’m kinda writing as if there’s a way around the edge of it? I can redo it if we’d like!

            "Reck not."
            ~Sir Nicholas Beauvallet

            #119217
            Beth Darlene
            @beth20

              (you did good too @beth20 ) Just thought I’d say so. (:

              Haha thanks!

              Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉

              #119218
              Joelle Stone
              @joelle-stone

                @anne_the_noob14,

                I’m gonna roll with it. Hopefully what I come up with doesn’t offend Dharin… :/ 🙂 But glad to have you back, and loved your posts (as usual)! 🙂


                @beth20
                ,

                Cool post! Just a tip, though, we made a Fantasy Character Castle n. 1 to post our RP-ing pieces in. This became a chat thingy. No biggy, just a bit of info. 😉

                "A writer's life consists of either writing their book or thinking about writing their book." ~?

                #119222
                Beth Darlene
                @beth20

                  @joelle-stone Yeah, I know, just thought I’d post it here also lol!

                  Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉

                  #119224
                  Joelle Stone
                  @joelle-stone

                    @beth20

                    Aha, got it. 🙂

                    "A writer's life consists of either writing their book or thinking about writing their book." ~?

                    #119232
                    Livi Ryddle
                    @anne_the_noob14

                    @joelle-stone Sounds good 🙂 He probably won’t be, because of how thick his skin has gotten over the past years… poor baby 🙁

                    "Reck not."
                    ~Sir Nicholas Beauvallet

                    #119234
                    Gracie
                    @kimlikesart

                      Oh wow oh wow oh wow!  @anne_the_noob14 @joelle-stone !!!; that was amazing!!!!

                      Jominkreesa

                      Passion means to be willing to suffer.

                      #119236
                      Gracie
                      @kimlikesart

                        @everyone

                        I really am wanting to replace Teagen with another fellow, who has almost an exact opposite personality…

                        I know we already covered this before @christlover @rusted-knight , but… Would it be terribly awful if Teagen went poof?

                        Jominkreesa

                        Passion means to be willing to suffer.

                        #119238
                        Dashuri Halad
                        @christlover

                        If you want to get rid of Teagan, I think it is fine if he leaves.

                        "When injustice becomes law, rebellion becomes duty."
                        -V

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