K’Nika smiked And ate an onion.
Julian sighed and threw them over his shoulder.
“Sorry Julian, we just don’t want you poisoning us again,” Lacey mumbled
I very much intentionally, with sound mind and full thought and definitely full intention – did I mention that? – deliberately pulled the pin out of my smoke grenade. Because you are only supposed to handle these if you are going to use them.
Now, in my favor, these aren’t the exploding exploding kinds. But the shell definitely…[Read more]
He grabbed the knife by his its blade!
Alessio leapt back, breathing heavily as the knife vanished in Arsene’s hand, disintegrated almost instantly. All the color drained from his face as he imagined what could happen if Arsene used his powers on him.
“Wow, nice acting skills, ten points. You can act out your drama play, when I’m sure nobod…[Read more]
Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 week, 4 days ago
@jared-williams CONGRATULATIONS on finishing it!!!!!!
I won’t be able to help you out; I’m sorry. Thanks for thinking of me, though.
Sherlock discovered how hard he could hit the brakes, coming to a stop. The idiot, who was in the road, took what looked like a cane/sword (Sherlock didn’t know which) and tapped the car hood. He scratched the back of his head, as he marveled at the “borrowed” car.
Ugh, I’m becoming more like Arsene, Sherlock thought. “You’re blocking the road!”…[Read more]
Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 week, 5 days ago
no real deadline. I’d like to start putting feelers out for traditional publishers this summer… but I have no set date or anything.
Except for the that magic mirror! 😄 But he wouldn’t remember that…😢
Yeah, glass cuts are not fun, poor baby…!!!
Shoot, I hope somebody teaches him how to pick glass out of his feet…
Not as a voice of reason lol, but definitely each in their own way! They all are hyper-skilled in their own thing, and could be twice as grand working…[Read more]
Welcome to the Character Castle! This is where you can bring your characters to meet one another (role-play), and perhaps even discover new things about them and their arcs.
A few guidelines:
1. No character may leave the boundaries of the castle, but you can invent any room (library, indoor garden, kitchen, etc.) as it pertains to…[Read more]
Joelle Stone replied to the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 week, 5 days ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>AHH YES I’D LOVE TO READ THIS SO MUCH!!!!! Unfortunately, I am over-committing myself at the moment and am not sure if I’ll have time. Is there a deadline to sign up?</p>
“Yeah… I wouldn’t eat those.” K’Nika replied.
“Julian’s poisoned us with berries before, so I don’t trust his judgement,” Lacey said.
“Just tell the entire world, would you, Lace?” Julian rolled his eyes.
“Maybe next time,” Ellie said kind of laughing at her friends.
AND HE REALLY DOESN’T. HE’S NEVER SEEN GLASS BEFORE. He didn’t know! And now his feet- Ayyyyy. My boy…
Though… you all’s characters are pretty smart, in their own ways, too…
I really like your new tagline!
I’ve been thinking about changing mine… *strokes chin thoughtfully*
Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 week, 5 days ago
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Aefflaed’s Weakness: A Love Story
This touching story began as a short story and quickly evolved into an epic. (well, a short novel, but still an epic story….if I can toot my own horn a bit. )
In my previous WIP, The Adventures of the Last Aygiff,…[Read more]
Alessio’s first plan was to find a place to hide, with the goal of surviving Arsene long enough to get off this ship and get his bearings. He was right now memorizing the location of everything on the ship, when he finished that he would “stumble upon” Arsene’s stolen goods and hand them to the guard.
At the moment Alessio was in the cafeter…[Read more]
Pia looked at K’Nika. She was the local, even though she was pretending to be Kallun’s sister.
The girl gazed at the berries. “Well.. it all depends..”
”they have to be perfectly ripe to eat, and they look unripe. They are red. But if they were half red and half blue, then they’d be perfect.”
Just thought you’d appreciate the running gag at home is “This Castle has only one braincell and he doesn’t know what glass it!”
Isaiah replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 week, 6 days ago
@miller Stomach/abdomen stabs are tricky. In order to be a fairly quick death, you need a couple things to happen. Massive loss of blood, direct damage to heart/lungs, or damage to the brain. Basically anything that will very quickly prevent oxygen from reaching the brain and other vital organs.
A wound to the stomach area (what we think of as…[Read more]
Miller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 week, 6 days ago
So anyone know if you can die to a stab wound in the abdomen or stomach? Google isn’t helping me at all.
Answer when you have the time and thanks!
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