December 20, 2020 at 9:18 pm #122953Hope Ann@hope-ann
Question of the week from Elisha! It’s a big question but what focused tips do you have?
What are some tips/advice to craft a compelling book summary (the one on the back of the book/the one readers will look at to see if they want to read the story)?
Victory in the march. Hope in the destination.December 21, 2020 at 10:54 am #122970Zee@zee
What I’ve learned is that a good book summary includes three things–it introduces the main characters, the setting, and the conflict. You don’t want an in-depth discussion of any of these things (after all, most casual book browsers will move on after a paragraph or two) but just enough to raise questions in your potential reader’s mind that he (or she) wants answered.
You can learn a lot by reading descriptions for popular books in your genre. If you keep an eye out for the three key components, you’ll nearly always find them.
As an example, here’s the description of my first book:
“All Anna Belko wants is a quiet cup of tea. (The opening line introduces the main character.) For a young garment factory worker in the uneasy city of Dor, such moments of peace are few and far between. (And this bit describes the setting.) When she stops by a little cafe called Oxsana’s on her way home from work, she has many things on her mind, but meeting the man who will turn her life upside down is not one of them.
After his cousin is killed, Boris Merkovich wonders if he will ever feel a moment of peace again. (The most important secondary character is also featured.) As the manager of Oxsana’s, his family’s cafe he doesn’t have time for grieving. But everything changes when he stumbles and almost pours a pot of tea into his customer’s lap. To his surprise, the young woman doesn’t become angry…
Love comes in unexpected ways. Neither Anna nor Boris dreamed this unexpected encounter would change both their lives, but as Dor implodes, Boris and Anna’s relationship, begun over spilled tea and a heartfelt prayer, only grows stronger.
However, it isn’t long before Anna realizes the hatred destroying her city isn’t just “out there.” If Boris cannot forgive his cousin’s killer, it will cost both him and Anna everything they’ve begun to hope for. (The blurb concludes with a hint as to what the main conflict will be, and hopefully raises questions about what will happen.)”
This was the first blurb for the first book I ever wrote, but still I think it’s fairly good. The reason for that is, I had a lot of help. Treat your book blurb just like you’d treat any other part of your story, and make sure you get plenty of advice from people who know what they’re talking about before sending it out into the world.December 21, 2020 at 12:32 pm #122972sparrowhawke@sparrowhawke
I’ve never had to officially write a blurb, but these are some things I’ve noticed that blurbs do:
1. Introduce the MC, define their want/story goal, hint at their need
2. Define the setting (e.g., in the Kingdom of Such-and-Such, in a dystopian future, in a world where people live in the sky, etc.)
3. Make the genre clear. I should have no question about the genre after reading a blurb. (This is sort of a pet peeve of mine when amateur authors don’t explain the genre or try to write too many into one story).
4. Hint at the theme. I’ve noticed this often phrased by giving the MC two choices, which sets up thematic conflict between the two or by stating what the MC will sacrifice. Or, it’s just explicitly stated (e.g., …as MC struggles to forget her past as she forges a new future.)
5. This isn’t universal, but I’ve often noticed blurbs will tell you what happens up to the first plot point and hint at the rest.
6. If the story is dual-POV, a separate paragraph introducing each of the MCs is in order and the third tells how their stories will interact.
I hope this is somewhat helpful!
Semper ubi sub ubi.December 21, 2020 at 2:03 pm #122975Arindown (Gracie)@arindown
I think writing a book blurb is like writing the first sentence of your book. It has to hook your reader.
I think the best blurbs are ones that leave me with unanswered questions. Questions that the book will answer for me. What are the Jewels of Anneria? Why does everyone distrust Heather and Picket Longtreader? Where to the cupboards in Henry’s wall lead?
Suspenseful (but still insightful) blurbs are the best ones.
Not all who wander are lost.
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