November 21, 2019 at 2:15 am #101699
I’ve never been much of a fiction writer, but a while ago, I started up a story that I never finished. I was wondering if any of you all would care to take a look at it and help me out a bit with knowing how to improve and figuring our where to go from here. There are only 3 1/2 chapters so far…and they’re not long 🙂
I’ll just tag a few people I know, but if you’re interested and know a little about writing, please – I would love to hear your thoughts and feedback. Thank you!
"Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.SpurgeonNovember 21, 2019 at 9:30 am #101701Evelyn@evelyn
@libby Heyo! I’d love to help you however I can. (:
Are you looking for help in what to do next in the story? So a plotting sort of help? Or something else?November 21, 2019 at 11:12 am #101706Emma Starr@emma-starr
@libby I don’t write fiction actively, but I read a lot of writing/about writing so that helps my editing skills. I’d be happy to read your work. 🙂
Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂 https://sevenbillionsmiles.home.blogNovember 21, 2019 at 11:39 am #101708Grace@h-jonesNovember 21, 2019 at 7:18 pm #101749WisdomOfProse@wisdomofprose
Dear Emily! I’ve missed you so!!!! Lovely to have you back! <3
I’d love to read your story! However, I doubt I’ll be able to put in as many comments as I would like to just now because of time constraints. So it might take me some time…not because I don’t want to work on it though! 😀
Anne (or Cordelia) Shirley 😉
"‘What! You too? I thought I was the only one." C.S. LEWISNovember 22, 2019 at 2:26 am #101783
First off, you guys made me cry! Wow… thank you so much for welcoming me back like this <3 Life’s been hectic and I’ve missed you all so much, but it’s been like a barrier came up between me and writing and I didn’t come here for a while. So thank you – it’s so good to see you guys, too!! <3
Evelyn, I’m not exactly sure xD I’d love any comments or feedback on my writing itself – I’ve never really written a lot of fiction. But I’d also love help on knowing where to go from here. I don’t know what to do next and whenever I have written, I’ve never actually written with a plot 🙂
Emma, thank you so much – I’d love any help that you’d be willing to give 😀
Grace!!!! (Wow, I’m so used to calling you Heather ;)) I’ve missed you so much!!
I think you have read some of these chapters… but I’d still love your advice if you have any xD
Dear, dear Anne,
I’ve missed you dearly, too!!
Any help you can give would be wonderful… but please – don’t feel any pressure 😀
Emily Byrd Starr
"Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.SpurgeonNovember 22, 2019 at 2:46 am #101787
Here’s the link to my page on the writing website I’m on. I couldn’t get the links to go through for the specific chapters, so I’m sorry about that. My story is called Elpízoume ston kýrio. So far, there are only four short chapters, the first one was posted on 11/19/18, if it’s hard to find. Thank you so much <3
"Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.SpurgeonNovember 24, 2019 at 3:38 pm #101952
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