I think this is a good start for a poem! I like the short line lengths and the fact that you have parallelism with the -ing words throughout the poem! Did you have any specific concerns about this portion of the poem? Will there be additional stanzas?
(Oh, just in case you were wondering who this person is who just came barging into the thread, I’m Bree.)
@katthewriter I LOVE this poem! The rhythm is very unique and adds a nice flavor to it. The words get you into the vibe of Christmas, but then you get this little sadness at the end of each line. I love love love it!!!
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