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  • #74829
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    Hey guys!

    I just wrote my first ever sci-fi. It’s written from a robot’s POV observing the complex psychology and humanity of a little girl. It’s a short story – just 4,785 words.

    Would anybody be interested in beta reading? I’ll also swap critiques with the first volunteer who has their own short story to trade.

    Thanks. πŸ™‚

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    #74861
    J. Dekreel
    @dekreel

    @daeus-lambΒ  That sounds great! I’m not the best beta-reader, but I’d like to give it a shot.

    I don’t really have any short stories for trade. . . would a segment work?

    ENFP-T. Cartoonist, "half-writer", wolfish.
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    #74867
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    That sounds interesting. I’d be interested in beta-reading. πŸ™‚ And I have a 2,341-word fantasy short story I could get a critique on.

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #74925
    Alabama Rose
    @bama-rose

    I’d be interested in reading it! Do you want more than one reader? If not than I don’t have to. But if you want more people just let me know.

    Courage, dear heart ~ Aslan

    #75121
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    @dekreel Great! Yeah, I could handle a small excerpt. πŸ™‚


    @r-m-archer
    Nice. Send it over any time.

    I’ll be sending you all docs via email.

    (@bama-rose)

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    #75122
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    Let me know if you get them.

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    #75134
    Alabama Rose
    @bama-rose

    @daeus-lamb

    Yep, I got it!

    Courage, dear heart ~ Aslan

    #75140
    J. Dekreel
    @dekreel

    @daeus-lamb

    I got it!! I’ll take a look at it tonight. πŸ˜‰

    ENFP-T. Cartoonist, "half-writer", wolfish.
    Blog

    #75148
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    I got it. πŸ™‚

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #75170
    J. Dekreel
    @dekreel

    @daeus-lambΒ  How do you want me to send you my segment? I could email you, or shoot you a link.

    ENFP-T. Cartoonist, "half-writer", wolfish.
    Blog

    #75188
    Alabama Rose
    @bama-rose

    @daeus-lamb

    Wow. *sighs*Β  I don’t know how you just did that but it wasΒ amazing.Β I just changed a few wordings but it was really good. Loved it. 😌

    Courage, dear heart ~ Aslan

    #75194
    Thomas (CrØss_Blβ‚³de)
    @thewirelessblade

    Hit me with one. It’ll be a while before I read it, more likely then not.

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    #75213
    ScarletImmortalized
    @scarletimmortalized

    @daeus-lamb

    It sounds so interesting! I’d love to read! I’m not the best beta reader but I’ll do my best!

    I’ve got a historical short story under 3,000 words. I’ve been trying to polish it up. I’ve had it a while so it might need a revision lol! Does that sound like a nice swap?

    β€œScarlet, What are you eating?” ~ β€œGhost peppers...” ~ Robin sighed.

    #75283
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    @thewirelessblade Alright. If it’s a long while, I might publish it by then, but don’t rush yourself if you’re busy.


    @scarletimmortalized
    Thanks. πŸ™‚ Yeah, go ahead and email it to me.

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