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  • #90549
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    @jennythefaun

    Awesome! Mine is here. I can’t wait to read yours! 😀

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #90700
    JennytheFaun
    @jennythefaun

    @r-m-archer and @edmund-lloyd-fletcher I read both your stories! They were super different but I enjoyed each a lot. Do you want a full beta read, or do you just want high-level, general feedback? Thanks for letting me read these!

    And @edmund-lloyd-fletcher I “got it” when you told the name of the county. 😁

    "...by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there."

    #90701
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    @jennythefaun

    A full beta read would be lovely, if you have the time. 🙂

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #90703
    JennytheFaun
    @jennythefaun

    @r-m-archer will do!

    "...by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there."

    #90704
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    @jennythefaun

    Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. ^-^

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #90727
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    @jennythefaun

    Hey! I really appreciated your feedback; that was super helpful. (Next time I edit something I need to pay more attention to passive voice and weak verbs, lol.) I’ve made changes, and I was wondering if you’d be willing/have the time to look it over again and make sure I resolved everything sufficiently? If not, I totally get it; life is busy, lol.

    How is your story going so far?

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #90810
    JennytheFaun
    @jennythefaun

    @r-m-archer I’m glad it helped! I really only felt like there were minor things to comment on. The plot, characters, and worldbuilding are all so, so good. Yep, I’d be happy to give it another read-through!

    Mine is here!!!! https://1drv.ms/w/s!AvW4C3toKDfAgXDZjicPAisSPxL7 Warning: it’s in Word, which is way less convenient for commenting than Google docs. I feel like it still needs a lot of work to become everything it should be, so any and all of you are welcome to be ruthless! @eden-anderson @edmund-lloyd-fletcher and @toklaham-veruzia, I’ll tag you guys too since you’ve been on this thread. I’d appreciate any feedback you can give, but don’t feel obligated!

    "...by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there."

    #90811
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    @jennythefaun

    Thank you! ^-^

    Yay! 😀 I’m super excited to look it over!

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #92161
    JennytheFaun
    @jennythefaun

    So, this is last minute, but I meant to tag the flabbits ( @wordsmith @evelyn @trufflehunter ) to see if any of you would be interested in giving my story a read-through before I enter it. I know it’s down to the wire so if you don’t get a chance that’s fine, just thought I’d check with y’all! Are any of you entering the contest?

    "...by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there."

    #92255
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @r-m-archer @jennythefaun Yes, I have entered it! I edited a story from earlier this year that I wrote for a different contest. Just trying my luck I guess. 😛

    I enjoyed both of your stories! (I hope you don’t mind that I read yours Ariel… O.o)

     

    #92256
    JennytheFaun
    @jennythefaun

    @evelyn thanks for reading! Any critiques or suggestions before I send it in?

    "...by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there."

    #92268
    R.M. Archer
    @r-m-archer

    @evelyn Awesome! 😀 Good luck! No, that’s perfectly fine. I expected most of the people on this thread would give it at least a passing glance, lol. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

    Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.

    #92611
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @jennythefaun Uh… I don’t remember…

    Sorry I got back to you so late. 😛

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