Prologue

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  • #44060
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @e-b-raulands, thanks.

    This story I’m writing is fantasy, though it probably will have a lot of sci-fi elements out of the medieval world of Aspeldon where the story takes place (mostly).

    "Muhahaha!"- Unknown Villain

    #44128
    Warden
    @nuetrobolt

    @andrew, I think its great! I really like the humour. But, (sorry to contradict) I don’t think you had too many ellispes. I thought that was good. It was all part of the style. Anyways, that’s just my opinion, and I’m not very experienced (should you say) in writing, so you’d better not even listen to me. It feels very colourful, and I really want to read the rest of this book!

    Do you have a title yet?

    Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson

    #44129
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @nuetrobolt, thank you. 🙂

    The name of this story is Nightjay.

    I have another thread where I posted the plot of this story to get advice, but if you don’t want any spoilers, don’t read that thread. “)

    "Muhahaha!"- Unknown Villain

    #44130
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @nuetrobolt, well, that’s only if you don’t want any spoilers. (But that’s up to you.)

    "Muhahaha!"- Unknown Villain

    #44492
    Warden
    @nuetrobolt

    @andrew I think I want spoilers. *Tries to figure out how to find this other thread.*

     

    Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson

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