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@this-is-not-an-alien @k-a-grey
Thank you both for your feedback!
I’m not used to working with such a small word count, so it was helpful to see the areas that I need to polish.
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Is it part of a larger story, or is it just this scene?
It is part of a much larger story, at least I want it to be. Right now it’s still in the developing stages but I have high hopes for it’s future. 😁 I didn’t explain this in my submission, but the books Soren insisted were so important to the mission are actually to help her master her special ability called Vir manipulation, which is sort of like the world’s magic system.
Also, Parr is an apprentice dragon trainer.What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
Hey y’all, I enjoyed both of them.
I think my vote is going for @winter_rose but Emily’s was real close.
Happy writing!
Yay @winter_rose! Congratulations!
and thank you, @noah-cochran for the tie-breaker!
Don't cry for me, for I go where music is born ~J.S. Bach
Thanks!
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
@winter_rose Congratulations! Hey, do you want to throw out a new prompt for us?
@Emily-waldorf Don’t be too hard on yourself, you did great! Would you like to join in the next prompt? I think this little exercise helps us all see our weak points, but that means we can work on becoming better writers! Maybe next time when writing an argument, you can try to see if the character’s reactions are proportional to the “trigger.” You can actually get the reader interested in the dialogue, even if it’s about coffee filters, if they can relate. So maybe more of some playful banter going on instead of a full-blown argument.Thanks for the advice! I might join–I think I’ll wait on the prompt and to see how much time I have. 🙂
Don't cry for me, for I go where music is born ~J.S. Bach
Sure!
Umm…
Prompt: Two characters are both trying to hide from each other something they shouldn’t have. Each character is suspicious of the other.
If that one doesn’t sound like it will work I can try to come up with a different prompt.
What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.
@winter_rose That prompt sounds perfect! Before I say I’ll join though, I’ll see who is joining and who would be willing to be a judge for this round. Also, since Christmas Eve is tomorrow, let’s extend the deadline to Monday instead.
Tagging @emma-walker @joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien @calidris @erynne @noah-cochran
Also, Noah is the only guy right now.😅 Do you know of any more guys or gals who might want to join?
@storysmith is the only other guy I remember his tag name XD
i might could do that. We will see.
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
Sorry I have not been able to follow this much, but I am on vacation for the next several days and could try to judge.
“Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the assessment that something else is more important th
@storysmith I totally understand! It is the holidays after all! 😀
"If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott
@k-a-grey I will probably not join this one, unless contestants are needed. I could judge, however. 🙂Don't cry for me, for I go where music is born ~J.S. Bach
Where are we at on this?
Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.
Where are we at on this?
Deadline ends tomorrow night. I’m a judge.
Don't cry for me, for I go where music is born ~J.S. Bach
Cool, thank you. Let me know if y’all need any more judges or contestants. Vacation is sadly over so I have to get back to my life apparently
Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.
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