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  • #146160
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @this-is-not-an-alien @k-a-grey

    Thank you both for your feedback!

    I’m not used to working with such a small word count, so it was helpful to see the areas that I need to polish.

    ~~~~~


    @emily-waldorf

    Is it part of a larger story, or is it just this scene?

    It is part of a much larger story, at least I want it to be. Right now it’s still in the developing stages but I have high hopes for it’s future. 😁 I didn’t explain this in my submission, but the books Soren insisted were so important to the mission are actually to help her master her special ability called Vir manipulation, which is sort of like the world’s magic system.
    Also, Parr is an apprentice dragon trainer.

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #146161
    Noah Cochran
    @noah-cochran

    @k-a-grey

    Hey y’all, I enjoyed both of them.

    I think my vote is going for @winter_rose but Emily’s was real close.

    Happy writing!

    #146162
    Emily Waldorf
    @emily-waldorf

    Yay @winter_rose! Congratulations!

     

    and thank you, @noah-cochran for the tie-breaker!

    Your life is not your own so keep your hands off it. ~Sherlock Holmes

    #146163
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @emily-waldorf

    Thanks!

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #146169
    K. A. Grey
    @k-a-grey

    @winter_rose Congratulations! Hey, do you want to throw out a new prompt for us?


    @Emily-waldorf
    Don’t be too hard on yourself, you did great! Would you like to join in the next prompt? I think this little exercise helps us all see our weak points, but that means we can work on becoming better writers!  Maybe next time when writing an argument, you can try to see if the character’s reactions are proportional to the “trigger.” You can actually get the reader interested in the dialogue, even if it’s about coffee filters, if they can relate.  So maybe more of some playful banter going on instead of a full-blown argument.

     

    #146171
    Emily Waldorf
    @emily-waldorf

    @k-a-grey

    Thanks for the advice! I might join–I think I’ll wait on the prompt and to see how much time I have. 🙂

    Your life is not your own so keep your hands off it. ~Sherlock Holmes

    #146181
    Winter Rose
    @winter_rose

    @k-a-grey

    Sure!

    Umm…

    Prompt: Two characters are both trying to hide from each other something they shouldn’t have.  Each character is suspicious of the other.

    If that one doesn’t sound like it will work I can try to come up with a different prompt.

    What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

    #146198
    K. A. Grey
    @k-a-grey

    @winter_rose That prompt sounds perfect!  Before I say I’ll join though, I’ll see who is joining and who would be willing to be a judge for this round.  Also, since Christmas Eve is tomorrow, let’s extend the deadline to Monday instead.

    Tagging @emma-walker @joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien @calidris @erynne @noah-cochran

    Also, Noah is the only guy right now.😅 Do you know of any more guys or gals who might want to join?

    #146208
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @storysmith is the only other guy I remember his tag name XD

     

    i might could do that. We will see.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #146209
    Joshua Scheele
    @storysmith

    @emma-walker @k-a-grey

    Sorry I have not been able to follow this much, but I am on vacation for the next several days and could try to judge.

    #146211
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @storysmith I totally understand! It is the holidays after all! 😀

    • This reply was modified 3 weeks, 6 days ago by Emma Walker.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #146259
    Emily Waldorf
    @emily-waldorf

     


    @k-a-grey
    I will probably not join this one, unless contestants are needed. I could judge, however. 🙂

    Your life is not your own so keep your hands off it. ~Sherlock Holmes

    #146297
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Where are we at on this?

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #146306
    Emily Waldorf
    @emily-waldorf

    Where are we at on this?

    Deadline ends tomorrow night. I’m a judge.

    Your life is not your own so keep your hands off it. ~Sherlock Holmes

    #146307
    Erynne
    @erynne

    @Emily-waldorf

    Cool, thank you. Let me know if y’all need any more judges or contestants. Vacation is sadly over so I have to get back to my life apparently

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

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