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  • #50367
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    @dakota, I love it!!!! It’s so descriptive!!! It’s really amazing!! ANd for some reason, I hear an epic orchestra piece playing along with it.

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #50368
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @dakota Beautiful!

    #50371
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @evelyn and @parker- Thank you! And Parker I totally agree with the epic orchestra music.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #50372
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    @dakota, it was really fun to read.

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #50392
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @Dakota, I like it! Good job!

    Random Stranger: "What do you want to do when you grow up?"
    Me: "Write every inch of your future."

    #51964
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @andrew  Thank you!

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #52118
    Libby
    @libby

    @Dakota @parker @evelyn @whoever-esle-wants-to-read-this
    Hey guys, sorry it’s been forever since I dropped in here, but here’s a lullaby I wrote for a story this past year.  Hope you enjoy!

    Song of a Star

    Star in the sky,
    Lonely and blue,
    Farwell to thy
    Fading view.
    So come tomorrow
    Thy smile array,
    And all the world’s sorrow
    Be wiped far away!
    Oh will that day
    Come sunrise, or nay?
    Oh star in the sky—
    My star in the sky,
    I bid thee goodbye,
    Fair star yonder nigh,
    Oh star in the sky—
    My star in the sky.

    "Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.Spurgeon

    #52163
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @libby Aww, I love it! lullabies have s special place in my heart. 🙂

    #52186
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    @libby, that was really cool!!!! I can hear soft notes floating from the piano as I read.

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #52593
    Libby
    @libby

    @evelyn @parker Thanks you guys!  I love lullabies, too. 🙂

    "Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.Spurgeon

    #52604
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    @libby, It was my pleasure!! I love reading these!!

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #52614
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @libby  So do I, though I haven’t written many yet. This one is lovely. I started singing to myself just now while I was reading it.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #52789
    Libby
    @libby

    @parker 🙂 Do you write any poetry/songs?


    @dakota
    Thank you 🙂 I love how you can just read something and it begins to play in your head along with the rhythm.  I think that’s one of the reasons I love poetry.

    "Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.Spurgeon

    #52795
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    @libby, No. I actually used to hate reading any poems, but reading some has given me a liking for them. I may even write one, one day.

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #52886
    Libby
    @libby

    @parker That’s neat.  I didn’t get into reading poetry (except my own and my friends’) until just a few months ago.  It’s crazy how much amazing stuff there is out there.  And if you ever decide to write a poem, I’d love to see it! 🙂

    "Young people, you must pray, for your passions are strong and your wisdom is little."C.H.Spurgeon

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