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September 18, 2018 at 11:42 am #48036Parker Hankins@parker
That’s so beautiful!!!! And so true!!!
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September 18, 2018 at 11:52 am #48039Dakota@dakota@parker Thank you!
Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.September 18, 2018 at 11:59 am #48041Parker Hankins@parkerMy pleasure!
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September 18, 2018 at 12:04 pm #48042September 18, 2018 at 12:44 pm #48047Jenna Terese@jenwriter17@dakota Lovely! 😀
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www.jennaterese.comSeptember 18, 2018 at 1:11 pm #48050Andrew Schmidt@andrew@dakota, oh, nice! I like it! 🙂
Random Stranger: "What do you want to do when you grow up?"
Me: "Write every inch of your future."September 18, 2018 at 5:45 pm #48088Brink@nuetrobolt@dakota, your first poem is amazing, and your second is so beautiful. Wow! You have talent!
@jane-maree I just wish I could hear the tune for that. Its really good as a poem, that’s for sure!
@libby your song is beautiful. Once again, I wish I could hear the tune. I love the ocean, and this song is just…wow.Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson
September 18, 2018 at 5:46 pm #48089Brink@nuetrobolt@andrew, thanks for tagging me! I wouldn’t have wanted to miss this thread.
Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson
September 18, 2018 at 5:47 pm #48090Brink@nuetroboltWish I was a poet. Well, I guess you could call me a poet (I’ve written poems, though none any good) but I wish I was a good one.
Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson
September 18, 2018 at 6:14 pm #48093Jane Maree@jane-maree@dakota Ahhh I loved it!
The only thing that threw me off was the line “Ev’ry joy and each sorrow of my soul” — it seemed really long in comparison to the others. That said, if put to music it can still work fine, so it’s not necessarily an issue. 😛
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September 19, 2018 at 1:22 am #48172Libby@libby@dakota This rings so sweet and so true – thanks for posting it! <3
@nuetrobolt Thanks so much! You are very encouraging!
Also, even if you don’t consider yourself a “good” poet, I definitely would love to see something from you sometime, if you wouldn’t mind. 😉Elen sÃla lúmenn' omentielvo
September 21, 2018 at 2:58 pm #48649EricaWordsmith@ericawordsmithI love it @dakota!!!
Tek an ohta! Tek an cala!
September 25, 2018 at 11:11 am #49373Dakota@dakota@libby  @ericawordsmith  @andrew  @jenwriter17   Thank you! Feel free to share this with anyone you know who could be encouraged by it ( that includes tagging people on here ).
@jane-maree Thank you! I’ll take a look at that line . . .
@nuetrobolt I’ll keep tagging you! Thanks!
@evelyn Thank you! 🙂- This reply was modified 6 years ago by Dakota.
Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.September 26, 2018 at 8:30 pm #49603Brink@nuetrobolt@dakota, ok, thanks.
Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson
October 2, 2018 at 11:17 am #50366Dakota@dakota@nuetrobolt @evelyn @jane-maree  @libby  @ericawordsmith  @andrew  @jenwriter17 @parker @the-fledgling-artist  @serenity @carolyn-matthews @katthewriter @jillifish @caleb-e-king
This one I wrote a couple years ago. I’ve revised it some since then but it is still one of my personal favorites. . . “The Almighty”
(V1) Have you considered the Almighty,
The King of kings and glory?
He stirs up oceans with His power.
With understanding calms seas.
He binds the waters in thick black clouds
And makes the darkness His shroud.
Deep calls to deep at the sound of His majesty.
(Chorus) Let all the earth fear the Lord Jesus,
The God of glory and power.
He’s excellent and most glorious.
The mountains smoke in the hour
He touches hills. Rainbows clothe His throne.
God of justice, honor and majesty
The Almighty.
(V2) He laid the earth into its cornerstone
And clothed the horse with thunder.
The eagle flies by His wisdom alone.
He gave the frost its crown of ice, Â
The ground its carpet of emerald green,
And skies its clouds for a screen.
Storms calm to peace at the word of His majesty.
(Repeat chorus)
(Bridge) I see these mighty works of His hand
And fall on my face.
Would He want a worm like me to stand
In the lands of light and glory?
Yet, the King of nations, Builder of mountains
Lord of stars and princes, founder of fountains-
He turns, arms spread wide, and calls me to His majesty. Â
(V3) Have you considered the Almighty
The King of kings and glory?
He laid down His glory and honor
And came to die on Calvary.
Then Jesus rose with grace and sovereignty
Redeeming souls that were lost like me
Now we are freed by the mercy of His majesty.Â
Let all the earth praise the Lord Jesus,
The God of mercy and power.
He’s compassionate and glorious.
His servants bless His name ever
And forever. Anthems clothe His praiseÂ
God of justice, honor and majesty
The Almighty.
That’s that. Comments, critiques and anything else you want to say is welcome.
Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You. -
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