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  • #48036
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    That’s so beautiful!!!! And so true!!!

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #48039
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @parker  Thank you!

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #48041
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    My pleasure!

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #48042
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @dakota Aww, that was really sweet.  <3 I love it!

    #48047
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @dakota Lovely! 😀

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
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    #48050
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @dakota, oh, nice! I like it! 🙂

    Random Stranger: "What do you want to do when you grow up?"
    Me: "Write every inch of your future."

    #48088
    Brink
    @nuetrobolt

    @dakota, your first poem is amazing, and your second is so beautiful. Wow! You have talent!

    @jane-maree
    I just wish I could hear the tune for that. Its really good as a poem, that’s for sure!

    @libby
    your song is beautiful. Once again, I wish I could hear the tune. I love the ocean, and this song is just…wow.

    Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson

    #48089
    Brink
    @nuetrobolt

    @andrew, thanks for tagging me! I wouldn’t have wanted to miss this thread.

    Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson

    #48090
    Brink
    @nuetrobolt

    Wish I was a poet. Well, I guess you could call me a poet (I’ve written poems, though none any good) but I wish I was a good one.

    Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson

    #48093
    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree

    @dakota Ahhh I loved it!

    The only thing that threw me off was the line “Ev’ry joy and each sorrow of my soul” — it seemed really long in comparison to the others. That said, if put to music it can still work fine, so it’s not necessarily an issue. 😛

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    #48172
    Libby
    @libby

    @dakota This rings so sweet and so true – thanks for posting it! <3


    @nuetrobolt
    Thanks so much!  You are very encouraging!
    Also, even if you don’t consider yourself a “good” poet, I definitely would love to see something from you sometime, if you wouldn’t mind. 😉

    Elen síla lúmenn' omentielvo

    #48649
    EricaWordsmith
    @ericawordsmith

    I love it @dakota!!!

    Tek an ohta! Tek an cala!

    #49373
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @libby   @ericawordsmith  @andrew   @jenwriter17    Thank you! Feel free to share this with anyone you know who could be encouraged by it ( that includes tagging people on here ).


    @jane-maree
      Thank you! I’ll take a look at that line . . .


    @nuetrobolt
      I’ll keep tagging you! Thanks!


    @evelyn
    Thank you! 🙂

    • This reply was modified 6 years ago by Dakota.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #49603
    Brink
    @nuetrobolt

    @dakota, ok, thanks.

     

    Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson

    #50366
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @nuetrobolt  @evelyn  @jane-maree   @libby   @ericawordsmith  @andrew   @jenwriter17  @parker @the-fledgling-artist   @serenity @carolyn-matthews  @katthewriter  @jillifish @caleb-e-king

    This one I wrote a couple years ago. I’ve revised it some since then but it is still one of my personal favorites. . . “The Almighty”

     

    (V1) Have you considered the Almighty,

    The King of kings and glory?

    He stirs up oceans with His power.

    With understanding calms seas.

    He binds the waters in thick black clouds

    And makes the darkness His shroud.

    Deep calls to deep at the sound of His majesty.

     

    (Chorus) Let all the earth fear the Lord Jesus,

    The God of glory and power.

    He’s excellent and most glorious.

    The mountains smoke in the hour

    He touches hills. Rainbows clothe His throne.

    God of justice, honor and majesty

    The Almighty.

     

    (V2) He laid the earth into its cornerstone

    And clothed the horse with thunder.

    The eagle flies by His wisdom alone.

    He gave the frost its crown of ice,  

    The ground its carpet of emerald green,

    And skies its clouds for a screen.

    Storms calm to peace at the word of His majesty.

     

    (Repeat chorus)

     

    (Bridge) I see these mighty works of His hand

    And fall on my face.

    Would He want a worm like me to stand

    In the lands of light and glory?

    Yet, the King of nations, Builder of mountains

    Lord of stars and princes, founder of fountains-

    He turns, arms spread wide, and calls me to His majesty.  

     

    (V3) Have you considered the Almighty

    The King of kings and glory?

    He laid down His glory and honor

    And came to die on Calvary.

    Then Jesus rose with grace and sovereignty

    Redeeming souls that were lost like me

    Now we are freed by the mercy of His majesty. 

     

    Let all the earth praise the Lord Jesus,

    The God of mercy and power.

    He’s compassionate and glorious.

    His servants bless His name ever

    And forever. Anthems clothe His praise 

    God of justice, honor and majesty

    The Almighty.

     

    That’s that. Comments, critiques and anything else you want to say is welcome.

     

     

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

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