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  • #97821
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @andrew Thanks! And while He wills, I will.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98492
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands   @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)

     

    Well, guys, I don’t have one prepared for this week, so how about you guys take a turn and post lyrical or ballad-liked poems you’ve written. They don’t have be anything special or written within the last week. They could be years old. I would like to see you guys post some content on this thread. I can’t wait to see what ya got!

     

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98493
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @kari-karast

    @tdprince

    @w-o-holmes

    Lyrical Poems are Welcome here!

    • This reply was modified 1 month, 4 weeks ago by Dakota.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98500
    Emberynus The Dragonslayer
    @emberynus-the-dragonslayer

    😜 I ain’t got nuthin!

    You can't live for long living for nothing-Hector Griffin

    #98501
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @emberynus-the-dragonslayer Ha Ha!! Fine! : )

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98518
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

      @Dakota: Sorry, I don’t have any currently edited poems about. And the ones that I do have aren’t that good.

      (ISFP!) Artistic, redheaded, nature-loving, crazy writer. Mine favorite Indiana animal: Red Fox.

      #98535
      Dakota
      @dakota

      @andrew That’s okay! 🙂

      Psalm 119:11
      Your word I have hidden in my heart,
      That I might not sin against You.

      #98578
      Candide
      @candide

      Well, I have this one:

       

      No hope

      I keep my eyes open untill night

      I keep myself asleep 

      Listening silent stars.

      (I just forget they are above, really above)

       

      I read.

      I play cards alone.

      I wash one cup.

       

      (Stars are completely above).

      #99025
      Dakota
      @dakota

      @candide Welcome to thread and thanks for posting! 🙂

      Hmm . . . *reads over poem again* I like the emotion of the poem and the language used in it. It just seems that the poem is a bit short. There’s not enough there to support it’s purpose.

      Psalm 119:11
      Your word I have hidden in my heart,
      That I might not sin against You.

      #99034
      Candide
      @candide

      Thanks, @dakota

      I like small poetry. In fact, my goal is 15/18 lines. So, if it is not enough, let’s rewrite! (I intended to portray loneliness.)

      Now, your turn, guys.

      #99332
      Dakota
      @dakota

      @parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands   @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)

      The one for this week a still a little rough. But I don’t have anything else prepared, so here it is. I had a title, but then I scratched it soo, it needs one.

      When the sky splits and shatters
      It scatters hail and fire on you life
      And the life where you existed
      Is twisted up in winds of strife

      When in fierce thunders that throb
      A sob seems lost, unheard in chaos
      Yet the brave hearts give a cry
      To the sky “For Him I’ll endure ”

      Brave heart one who stands firm when the flow
      Undertow pulls against all that’s true
      Brave heart one who fights all alone
      With broken bone and all bruised and blue
      I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

      When enemies enter in
      Seem to win over everything right
      They ransack safety and joy
      They deploy doubt to fight your faith

      They pack punches hard as rock
      They mock the life you’ve always stood for
      Those you love they snatch away
      Yet day by day I’ll be a brave heart

      Brave heart one who knows what they believe
      Never leave the standard of the King
      Brave heart one who gives their life
      Let the knife shed their blood so another can live
      I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

      Blood hot and bold I’ll set ablaze
      Live in ways that they’ve never seen
      Faith for a shield.Truth wrapped around
      Stand my ground I’ll fight for a God unseen
      I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

      Oh, Lord, make me a brave heart
      Set apart to serve them for You
      And be true to the Words You gave
      I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

      Psalm 119:11
      Your word I have hidden in my heart,
      That I might not sin against You.

      #99382
      Andrew Schmidt
      @andrew

        @candide: I like the emotions and feelings you portray in your poem. 😀

         

        @Dakota: You should build a collection of poems.

         

        (ISFP!) Artistic, redheaded, nature-loving, crazy writer. Mine favorite Indiana animal: Red Fox.

        #100178
        Dakota
        @dakota

        @parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands   @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)

        This is a revision of a song I wrote several years ago. As usual, critique and enjoy!

        Hand Painted
        Springtime meadow sprinkled with color
        From flowers of the field in their fairest blossom
        The hummingbirds all shimmer with hues
        All painted by a Creator God so awesome

        Stormy summer days charged with power
        They blacken the blue skies with their dark thunderheads
        The lightning bolts go blazing with light
        All flashing from the clouds the Almighty’s hand spreads

        These hand-painted scenes You created
        Are Masterpieces manifesting
        How Your wisdom is integrated
        In the backdrop and the details
        A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
        To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

        Rugged hills along rippling river
        All cloaked with the red flames only fall is known to own
        The embers of color burn down the bank
        Unrivaled in the vibrance that His sinless hands tone

        Snowflakes whiten the winter winds
        They frost o’er the spruce needles, the bright crimson berries
        Of holly, the frozen sod and the lake.
        Each fallen from the Lord’s invisible treasuries

        Each hand-painted scene You created
        Is a Masterpiece manifesting
        How Your wisdom is integrated
        Into the backdrop and the details
        A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
        To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

        Gentle waves of a tropic ocean
        They’re lapping the black shadows on sand-laden shoreline.
        A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
        To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

        Misted mountains in shrouds of gray
        Are standing among shaded and hazy hollows of green
        A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
        To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

        Each hand-painted scene You created
        Is a Masterpiece manifesting
        How Your wisdom is integrated
        Into the backdrop and the details
        A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
        To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

        Psalm 119:11
        Your word I have hidden in my heart,
        That I might not sin against You.

        #100179
        Dakota
        @dakota

        @kari-karast

        @tdprince

        @w-o-holmes

        Hand-Painted

        Psalm 119:11
        Your word I have hidden in my heart,
        That I might not sin against You.

        #100282
        Veraza Winterknight
        @kari-karast

        It’s so good! @dakota And I really like the one before it, too!

        Even the word hopeless is not entirely devoid of hope.

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