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  • #97821
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @andrew Thanks! And while He wills, I will.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98492
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands   @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)

     

    Well, guys, I don’t have one prepared for this week, so how about you guys take a turn and post lyrical or ballad-liked poems you’ve written. They don’t have be anything special or written within the last week. They could be years old. I would like to see you guys post some content on this thread. I can’t wait to see what ya got!

     

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98493
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @kari-karast


    @tdprince


    @w-o-holmes

    Lyrical Poems are Welcome here!

    • This reply was modified 1 year, 11 months ago by Dakota.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98500
    Emberynus The Dragonslayer
    @emberynus-the-dragonslayer

    😜 I ain’t got nuthin!

    Sold souls and dead promises

    #98501
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @emberynus-the-dragonslayer Ha Ha!! Fine! : )

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98518
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @Dakota: Sorry, I don’t have any currently edited poems about. And the ones that I do have aren’t that good.

    Random Stranger: "What do you want to do when you grow up?"
    Me: "Write every inch of your future."

    #98535
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @andrew That’s okay! 🙂

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #98578
    Candide
    @candide

    Well, I have this one:

     

    No hope

    I keep my eyes open untill night

    I keep myself asleep 

    Listening silent stars.

    (I just forget they are above, really above)

     

    I read.

    I play cards alone.

    I wash one cup.

     

    (Stars are completely above).

    #99025
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @candide Welcome to thread and thanks for posting! 🙂

    Hmm . . . *reads over poem again* I like the emotion of the poem and the language used in it. It just seems that the poem is a bit short. There’s not enough there to support it’s purpose.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #99034
    Candide
    @candide

    Thanks, @dakota

    I like small poetry. In fact, my goal is 15/18 lines. So, if it is not enough, let’s rewrite! (I intended to portray loneliness.)

    Now, your turn, guys.

    #99332
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands   @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)

    The one for this week a still a little rough. But I don’t have anything else prepared, so here it is. I had a title, but then I scratched it soo, it needs one.

    When the sky splits and shatters
    It scatters hail and fire on you life
    And the life where you existed
    Is twisted up in winds of strife

    When in fierce thunders that throb
    A sob seems lost, unheard in chaos
    Yet the brave hearts give a cry
    To the sky “For Him I’ll endure ”

    Brave heart one who stands firm when the flow
    Undertow pulls against all that’s true
    Brave heart one who fights all alone
    With broken bone and all bruised and blue
    I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

    When enemies enter in
    Seem to win over everything right
    They ransack safety and joy
    They deploy doubt to fight your faith

    They pack punches hard as rock
    They mock the life you’ve always stood for
    Those you love they snatch away
    Yet day by day I’ll be a brave heart

    Brave heart one who knows what they believe
    Never leave the standard of the King
    Brave heart one who gives their life
    Let the knife shed their blood so another can live
    I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

    Blood hot and bold I’ll set ablaze
    Live in ways that they’ve never seen
    Faith for a shield.Truth wrapped around
    Stand my ground I’ll fight for a God unseen
    I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

    Oh, Lord, make me a brave heart
    Set apart to serve them for You
    And be true to the Words You gave
    I’ll be brave, a brave heart.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #99382
    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

    @candide: I like the emotions and feelings you portray in your poem. 😀

     


    @Dakota
    : You should build a collection of poems.

     

    Random Stranger: "What do you want to do when you grow up?"
    Me: "Write every inch of your future."

    #100178
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands   @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)

    This is a revision of a song I wrote several years ago. As usual, critique and enjoy!

    Hand Painted
    Springtime meadow sprinkled with color
    From flowers of the field in their fairest blossom
    The hummingbirds all shimmer with hues
    All painted by a Creator God so awesome

    Stormy summer days charged with power
    They blacken the blue skies with their dark thunderheads
    The lightning bolts go blazing with light
    All flashing from the clouds the Almighty’s hand spreads

    These hand-painted scenes You created
    Are Masterpieces manifesting
    How Your wisdom is integrated
    In the backdrop and the details
    A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
    To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

    Rugged hills along rippling river
    All cloaked with the red flames only fall is known to own
    The embers of color burn down the bank
    Unrivaled in the vibrance that His sinless hands tone

    Snowflakes whiten the winter winds
    They frost o’er the spruce needles, the bright crimson berries
    Of holly, the frozen sod and the lake.
    Each fallen from the Lord’s invisible treasuries

    Each hand-painted scene You created
    Is a Masterpiece manifesting
    How Your wisdom is integrated
    Into the backdrop and the details
    A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
    To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

    Gentle waves of a tropic ocean
    They’re lapping the black shadows on sand-laden shoreline.
    A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
    To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

    Misted mountains in shrouds of gray
    Are standing among shaded and hazy hollows of green
    A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
    To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

    Each hand-painted scene You created
    Is a Masterpiece manifesting
    How Your wisdom is integrated
    Into the backdrop and the details
    A palate of colors inspired by the Divine.
    To praise all of His works I’ll lift this voice of mine.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #100179
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @kari-karast


    @tdprince


    @w-o-holmes

    Hand-Painted

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #100282
    Veraza Winterknight
    @kari-karast

    It’s so good! @dakota And I really like the one before it, too!

    "You can dance with my henchman."

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