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  • #102857
    Naiya Dyani
    @naiya-dyani

      @urwen-starial

      Kiet: *blinks* Um. . . no, of course not. White is the absence of color. That’s why you wear it to funerals. *shakes head* But you’re dodging the question. What are you planning to do. . . exactly?

      Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.

      #102860
      Urwen Starial
      @urwen-starial

        @naiya-dyani

        Kirat: *blinks* IM SORRY WHO WAS THE PERSON WHO TOLD YOU THAT YOU WEAR WHITE TO FUNERALS?!?!?!??!! Also while we’re at it: WHO WAS THE PERSON WHO TOLD YOU WHITE ISNT A COLOR?!?!?

        "Peace in our time. Imagine that."

        #102893
        Naiya Dyani
        @naiya-dyani

          @urwen-starial

          Kiet: *shakes head to clear ringing from his ears* To start with, I’m having a hard time thinking of something better to represent the color being taken out of your life when someone dies. However, I really don’t want to fight with you. . . so if you say it’s a color, I’m willing to let it go at that 😅.

          I’m guessing this ‘white is a color’ thing is some kind of ongoing argument you’ve been having with someone . . . ?

          Anyway, I’m noticing you’re doing an artful job of avoiding my question. 😏 Enough talk about white. What are you going to do?

          Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.

          #102905
          Urwen Starial
          @urwen-starial

            @naiya-dyani

            Kirat: first of all, yes. It’s an argument that I need backup on. Secondly, I’m not going to “do” anything. I’m really just gonna wing it!

            "Peace in our time. Imagine that."

            #102933
            Naiya Dyani
            @naiya-dyani

              @urwen-starial

              Kiet: That’s–even more concerning, Kirat. . . Hey, Naiya and I and the others are going on a trip tomorrow. Promise me you won’t do anything rash until I get back?

              Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.

              #102934
              Urwen Starial
              @urwen-starial

                Kirat: no promises. 😉It depends on your definition of rash.

                Me: *looks at Kiet* you could try threatening him with the chipmunk.

                "Peace in our time. Imagine that."

                #102946
                Naiya Dyani
                @naiya-dyani

                  @urwen-starial

                  Kiet: Rash: adjective. Pertaining to any action causing harm in any way to the author or anyone she cares about. *sighs* Listen, Kirat, I know you kind of really hate your author right now, but–let me put it this way. My friends and I are going on vacation. I want to relax for probably the first time since my book started. I won’t be able to if I don’t know you won’t hurt Urwen while I’m gone. And if I return and find her injured or dead. . . *swallows hard and goes a bit pale* I-I–really–don’t want to see that.

                  Grace: *suddenly materializes from the shadows and hisses in Kirat’s ear* How about I make it plain for you–if you cause distress or reawaken trauma for Kiet, not only will I severely injure you, I will unleash a horde of chipmunks upon you with the one you hate most at the front. You wouldn’t want that, now, would you? *smiles demurely*

                  Kiet: I don’t know what she just said, but please, for my sake, don’t hurt her, okay? *forces a smile*

                  Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.

                  #104221
                  Urwen Starial
                  @urwen-starial

                    @naiya-dyani, don’t get me wrong, you have a beautiful username, it’s so pretty! I am just tired, and probably should be spending time doing so many other things than sitting around and reading the forum activity. lol.

                    "Peace in our time. Imagine that."

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