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  • #36637
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    A cardinal… A male cardinal

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    #37031
    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree

    @katthewriter

    The picture doesn’t seem to be showing up, so I can’t see it. D:

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    #37033
    The Fledgling Artist
    @the-fledgling-artist

    @katthewriter me too. 🙁 sorry!

    "Though I'm not yet who I will be, I'm no longer who I was."

    #37039
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    @jane-maree oh sorry… It doesn’t want to load… i’ll try again, but I’m not sure if it’ll work. male cardinal

    #37040
    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree

    @katthewriter
    Oooooh dude that looks amazing! o-o

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    #37041
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    full view of  it

    #37042
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    Well thanks… @jane-maree but you can see in the big one, of all of it, I messed up the tail, and have a spot were I brought the blue of the sky into the cardinal..

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    #37103
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @katthewriter That bird is beautiful! What kind of paint did you use?

    #37118
    The Fledgling Artist
    @the-fledgling-artist

    @katthewriter that’s really good! If you really want some critique I can try, but this is honestly better then I think I could do. 🙂

    "Though I'm not yet who I will be, I'm no longer who I was."

    #37126
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @katthewriter That is sooooo good! 😀

    I love your profile pic 😉 is that your own horse???

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
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    #37204
    Buddy J.
    @wordsmith

    @katthewrite

    It’s beautiful! There is one thing I can see that you might want to change, and that is make it so I can see less of the tail. The way you have it, the bottom of the tail is angled right at the viewer, you might want to angle it away more, so as to hold the 3D effect more. Does that make sense?

    But otherwise, I think it is amazing. May I recommend you look at it as someone seeing it for the first time? Many times when we work on something for a really long time, trying to perfect, and refine it, we get to a state of mind where all we see are the things we need to fix. It can help to step back, and re-shift our focus (something I had to learn as a writer). 🙂

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    #37337
    Ara
    @itisastarrynight

    @katthewriter Were you wanting art critique? I know you posted it in the critique section so I would assume so,but I wasn’t sure.
    My critique is that the lineart defining the feathers is a little thick. Nothing is wrong with thick lineart, generally speaking, but for something fine and delicate like feathers it is best to have a thinner lineart for a lighter feel. Thicker lineart is good for heavier objects. So I recommend practicing line weight variation, something I, and most artists, tend to struggle with.
    My favorite thing with the drawing here is the cardinals legs/feet. They look amazing! The perspective on them in particular is good, I think.

    Keep painting! 😉

    Sketching with no reference is like hiking without a map!

    #37932
    Parker Hankins
    @parker

    Wow! Beautiful, @katthewriter!

    Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.

    #37963
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    @evelyn thank you! Just some Acrylic paint.


    @the-fledgling-artist
    Thanks! 🙂


    @jenwriter17
    Thanks! No, he’s not my horse, but he’s a sweet horse, who thinks if he licks you you’ll like him better XD 🙂 His name is Beau, and he’s a quarter horse Belgian mix.


    @wordsmith
    yes, that makes sense. Okay, thank you!


    @itisastarrynight
    okay, yes, i get that! And thank you… that’s funny, because i thought the feet were one of the worst parts.. But thanks!


    @parker
    Thanks so much! 🙂 😀

     

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    #38033
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @katthewriter Aw, he sounds sweet 🙂

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

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