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May 30, 2018 at 6:54 pm #37031Jane Maree@jane-mareeMay 30, 2018 at 7:04 pm #37033The Fledgling Artist@the-fledgling-artist
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@katthewriter me too. 🙁 sorry!
"Though I'm not yet who I will be, I'm no longer who I was."May 30, 2018 at 7:31 pm #37039
@jane-maree oh sorry… It doesn’t want to load… i’ll try again, but I’m not sure if it’ll work.May 30, 2018 at 7:32 pm #37040Jane Maree@jane-mareeMay 30, 2018 at 7:35 pm #37041May 30, 2018 at 7:36 pm #37042May 30, 2018 at 9:32 pm #37103May 30, 2018 at 10:25 pm #37118The Fledgling Artist@the-fledgling-artist
@katthewriter that’s really good! If you really want some critique I can try, but this is honestly better then I think I could do. 🙂
"Though I'm not yet who I will be, I'm no longer who I was."May 31, 2018 at 12:03 am #37126Jenna Terese@jenwriter17
@katthewriter That is sooooo good! 😀
I love your profile pic 😉 is that your own horse???
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.comMay 31, 2018 at 12:49 pm #37204Buddy J.@wordsmith
It’s beautiful! There is one thing I can see that you might want to change, and that is make it so I can see less of the tail. The way you have it, the bottom of the tail is angled right at the viewer, you might want to angle it away more, so as to hold the 3D effect more. Does that make sense?
But otherwise, I think it is amazing. May I recommend you look at it as someone seeing it for the first time? Many times when we work on something for a really long time, trying to perfect, and refine it, we get to a state of mind where all we see are the things we need to fix. It can help to step back, and re-shift our focus (something I had to learn as a writer). 🙂
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Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!June 1, 2018 at 12:34 pm #37337Ara@itisastarrynight
@katthewriter Were you wanting art critique? I know you posted it in the critique section so I would assume so,but I wasn’t sure.
My critique is that the lineart defining the feathers is a little thick. Nothing is wrong with thick lineart, generally speaking, but for something fine and delicate like feathers it is best to have a thinner lineart for a lighter feel. Thicker lineart is good for heavier objects. So I recommend practicing line weight variation, something I, and most artists, tend to struggle with.
My favorite thing with the drawing here is the cardinals legs/feet. They look amazing! The perspective on them in particular is good, I think.
Keep painting! 😉
Sketching with no reference is like hiking without a map!June 5, 2018 at 10:35 am #37932Parker Hankins@parker
Wow! Beautiful, @katthewriter!
Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.June 5, 2018 at 2:46 pm #37963
@evelyn thank you! Just some Acrylic paint.
@the-fledgling-artist Thanks! 🙂
@jenwriter17 Thanks! No, he’s not my horse, but he’s a sweet horse, who thinks if he licks you you’ll like him better XD 🙂 His name is Beau, and he’s a quarter horse Belgian mix.
@wordsmith yes, that makes sense. Okay, thank you!
@itisastarrynight okay, yes, i get that! And thank you… that’s funny, because i thought the feet were one of the worst parts.. But thanks!
@parker Thanks so much! 🙂 😀
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