March 6, 2020 at 9:39 pm #108222Livi Ryddle@anne_the_noob14
@coal-ledger True, true.
“Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"March 10, 2020 at 3:50 pm #108591
@anne_the_noob14 YWW is another site for Christian writers, with a gigantic content library and community, but it is a subscription based service(but TOTALLY worth it). Imo the best online writer’s thing ever.
XD Do you mean “intriguing”? I’m glad it does that, tho!
*tries to unfry your brain*
Yeahhh I’ll hafta talk to my friend about it still. I’ll keep that in mind, tho!
@coal-ledger WHICH POOR CHILD DID YOU KILL AND/OR TORTURE THIS TIME
"You can dance with my henchman."March 10, 2020 at 7:26 pm #108616
Hehe which one did I not?
Coal is gonna have to make a fatal choice
love triangles galore
Dangerous things be afoot in this bookMarch 11, 2020 at 12:56 pm #108651
Oh. Okay. I’m good with that.
Ohhh nnno the poor child you’re gonna break him.
They weren’t already?
BUT WHAT ABOUT RYN
"You can dance with my henchman."March 11, 2020 at 6:23 pm #108680
Clove’s death is gonna break Coal…poor child. They were perfect for each otherrrr
Ryn…Ryn is gonna be a part of that fatal choice
the fatal partMarch 11, 2020 at 6:30 pm #108681
I got my license yesterdayMarch 12, 2020 at 7:18 pm #108723Livi Ryddle@anne_the_noob14
@kari-karast Ah, nice. *nods*
*facedesks* Yes, that’s it XD
*grins* Thank you!
Congratulations on getting your license! *can’t wait for November when I can get mine*
Hm. *pats Coal soothingly* ‘sokay, Coal. You’ll be ok. I hope. My character Stilton can kinda relate to you right now… ish.
Stilton: *glares* If you dare kill Gwendolyn… *voice changes to just mad to mad and also very scary* …then. So. Help. Me. I will make your life miserable.
Me: Uh, I kinda don’t think you’re in the right position to make my life miserable, seeing as how I’m the author here…
Stilton: *gives me a “wanna bet?” look*
“Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"March 12, 2020 at 9:22 pm #108730
Hehe. How can I ruin so many characters’ lives in just one round of editing?March 16, 2020 at 3:53 pm #108949
@coal-ledger Ehhh. I’m still not 100% certain on that point. XP
*eye twitches* *hugs Ryn*
Ooh. Nice!! Drive around on your own much yet?
*snorts* Did you already finish the 2nd book or is this another round of edits on the 1st one?
I brought it up at choir a couple days ago, and we both agree we need to work on it again, but we ended laughing too much to actually plan any writing. XDXD So now I’m considering changing my forum signature to “Why are you cackling at me?” cuz out of context quotes are amazing. XD
"You can dance with my henchman."March 16, 2020 at 3:59 pm #108950
A bit. It’s at the mechanics right now.
*coughs* *cough coughs*
It’s going through another tedious round of editing and I have discovered that while pantsing is very enjoyable it gets you nowhere and you end up with a bunch of randomish scenes that connect but really dont and there’s no character arc or plot so I’ve decided to merge it with another story idea and plot which will give the characters the arcs they need and a plot
However, this round of editing so far is over 180 pages so *shrugs* It’s getting up into the novel length. Maybe it won’t end up being a trilogy but just a really longish bookMarch 16, 2020 at 4:03 pm #108951
Oof. Do I dare ask what happened?
I get that strongly. XP
But y’know, multiple plots in one is good. And fun.
I’m still worried for your characters. *hides*
"You can dance with my henchman."March 16, 2020 at 4:07 pm #108952
it had a leak and no odometer light xD
nah the characters are in an even worse predicament nowMarch 16, 2020 at 4:09 pm #108953
Ahhh. XD Much better than I was afraid of.
*discreetly gathers and hides all your characters*
I need to read this new draft. XD
"You can dance with my henchman."March 16, 2020 at 4:09 pm #108954
ill give you a hint thoMarch 16, 2020 at 4:10 pm #108955
xD i can add you later if u want
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