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  • #78747

    E. Veryone
    @e_elaine_soup5

    I ran my eyes over the words I translated in my head.

    “It looks like there’s a good, secluded path that way,” I said, pointing at the sheath of fabrics dripping from the ceiling, “It seems like a servant hallway.”

    Kieron looked up at the fabric with a furrowed brow, “I didn’t see those earlier.”

    Confused=my permanent state of mind

    #78760

    Veraza Winterknight
    @kari-karast

    Kieron frowned. Why hadn’t he seen that fabric before? You’d think it would’ve been obvious. Well, nothing to do about it now. “Well, let’s go then.”

    Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

    #79076

    @kari-karast (nice pic, btw) @andrew

    “Okay, then Karim, just knock him out already!” Andrew knew Malcom Ace would be back.

    "Hurry! Reading is fun!" Jinto Queb
    "Words are fires. Use them wisely." Vip, my tiny dragon

    #79080

    Veraza Winterknight
    @kari-karast

    (Thanks! @nuetrobolt Also did you change Aleck’s name to Andrew for some reason or is that a typo?) ( @andrew you might want to have the soldier guy do something before he gets smacked rather hard in the head with a long metal staff.)

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    Karim raised his staff. “I will, but I’m going to give him one more chance. Alright Strange-Soldier-Person-Who-Has-Apparently-Taken-A-Vow-Of-Silence-Or-Something, what do you want and who are you? I’m going to listen to Aleck and knock you out if you don’t answer this time.”

    Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

    #79082

    @kari-karast, oh, how embarrassing. No, he is still Aleck. Yes, that is a typo.

     

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    Aleck stared at Karim. “You really love drawing this out, don’t you?”

    "Hurry! Reading is fun!" Jinto Queb
    "Words are fires. Use them wisely." Vip, my tiny dragon

    #79084

    Veraza Winterknight
    @kari-karast

    @nuetrobolt Don’t worry, typos get to everyone.

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    Karim shook his head. “No, I don’t. But I am pretty interested in who this guy is and what he wants. And I’m not going to find that out if he’s unconscious.”

    Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

    #79124

    Andrew Schmidt
    @andrew

      Okay. Back again. So… right. The phantom warrior.

       

      The phantom warrior stared silently. They said something about knocking him out. He sighed. People. “I come to help; though I prefer not to be not to be knocked out. If you can.”

       

      BTW, is the phantom warrior supposed to be Armstrand or Jim-er-Julius? I just wanted to make sure.

      Writer. Drawer. Ginger. ISFP. Collector.
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      #79132

      Veraza Winterknight
      @kari-karast

      The phantom warrior is supposed to be Julius Armstrand, we’re pretending it was never Jim in the first place.

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      Karim lowered his staff. Finally. “So you want to help us. Okay. Who are you? And how do we know you’re not just trying to trick us into getting trapped?”

      Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

      #79154

      Andrew Schmidt
      @andrew

        “Well…” Armstrand motioned to the rest of the people standing behind her. “I don’t mean to sound rude, but did you ask that same question to all them too?” he paused. “I just came here to help.”

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        #79200

        Veraza Winterknight
        @kari-karast

        Karim opened his mouth, then closed it, then opened it again. “Well, no… but,” he held up a hand, stalling any protest, “they don’t have quite the motives you would. I mean, yes, it’s possible one of them would want the rubies for himself and try to trap everyone else. But, none of them have shown any inclination to do that, or have the knowledge of where all the traps are either. You, if your… uniform is any indication, do.”

        Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

        #79386

        Andrew Schmidt
        @andrew

          Armstrand paused. “Well… I’m not trying to trick you.” He turned slightly, lowering his sword. “May I come?”

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          #79607

          Veraza Winterknight
          @kari-karast

          Karim shrugged. “Sure. If it’s all right with the others.” He gave the others a questioning look.

          Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

          #79612

          Andrew Schmidt
          @andrew

            @kari-karast: I need to get back to this thread again.

             

            Armstrand cast a glance at others… who silently cast glances at each other as if in answer.

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            #79613

            Veraza Winterknight
            @kari-karast

            @andrew Yep. It’s been slow lately. Also, don’t forget about Delton. @scarletimmortalized @nuetrobolt @e_elaine_soup5

             

            Star Wars fanatic. Sword lover. Artist. Fantasy freak. ENFP. (and yes, that is actually me)

            #79616

            Andrew Schmidt
            @andrew

              Delton stared at the phantom knight ahead. For some reason, he felt he could trust his words. Just like any of the others he’d met, no vile or hate flickered in his eyes.

              He took a step forward, handing out his hands. “Hello, my name is Delton Gray. What is yours?”

              The phantom knight just stared at his hand for a moment, then shook it. “Julius Armstrand.”

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