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I don’t have much experience with poems and their inner complexities, but I had a burst of inspiration when I had a recent *cough* traumatizing *cough* experience.
I call this Stained.
It slinks
With blackest ink
Over lands of snow.
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It stains
With jagged grains
And never slows.
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It spreads
The darkest dread
That only grows.
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It creeps
From the deeps
Of blackest woe.
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It’s a bug
In my tub
And it has to go.
*splat*
"Moonlight drowns out all but the brightest stars." ~ J.R.R. Tolkien
@elisha-starquill Oh goodness. XD
I love it! I was trying to figure out what you were describing through the majority of the poem (a storm?) and then the plot twist… XD XD I love how you write it!
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