Fresh Poems!

[Dakota]

@urwen-starial

I LOVE this!! ❤❤❤ Being a writer of lyrical poetry, this poem has a lot of musical ‘feel’, if you will. It has some irregularity in the ryhtmn but that only lends to the ‘brokeness’ if the poem.

I don’t think I have any other criticisms!! Good job👍

 

Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.

[Urwen Starial]

@dakota

Thanks! 🙂 I like the rhythmic flow of poetry too.

"Peace in our time. Imagine that."

[Emberynus The Dragonslayer]

@urwen-starial

*screams*

BEAUTIFUL!!! I love it!

Sleep doesn't help if it's your soul that's tired.

[Emma Starr]

Here is a poem I wrote yesterday. 🙂 @evelyn @k-a-grey @libby @h-jones

sleepy

 

the blankets are

heavy on my chest

 

so heavy

 

heat fuzzes over me

 

the monochrome

with streaks of color

at the lines

fast-forward

fast forward

at the forefront

of my mind

 

but the round browns overwhelm,

puddling through the cracks

 

the warmth strums

through my muscles

 

my mind is in

a lilac mood

 

if my brain was busier

it would notice the galaxies

behind my eyes

 

but my body is

immoveable,

soft,

vulnerable,

in the warm

blackness

• This reply was modified 2 weeks, 2 days ago by Emma Starr.

Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂 https://sevenbillionsmiles.home.blog

[Evelyn]

@emma-starr Lovely my friend. I adore the image of the galaxies stored behind eyes. <3

[Emma Starr]

@evelyn Thank you!! That’s one of my favorite images too. :)))

Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂 https://sevenbillionsmiles.home.blog

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