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    I LOVE this!! ❤❤❤ Being a writer of lyrical poetry, this poem has a lot of musical ‘feel’, if you will. It has some irregularity in the ryhtmn but that only lends to the ‘brokeness’ if the poem.

    I don’t think I have any other criticisms!! Good job👍


    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    Urwen Starial


      Thanks! 🙂 I like the rhythmic flow of poetry too.

      "Peace in our time. Imagine that."

      Emberynus The Dragonslayer



      BEAUTIFUL!!! I love it!

      Sleep doesn't help if it's your soul that's tired.


      Here is a poem I wrote yesterday. 🙂 @evelyn @k-a-grey @libby @h-jones



      the blankets are

      heavy on my chest


      so heavy


      heat fuzzes over me


      the monochrome

      with streaks of color

      at the lines


      fast forward

      at the forefront

      of my mind


      but the round browns overwhelm,

      puddling through the cracks


      the warmth strums

      through my muscles


      my mind is in

      a lilac mood


      if my brain was busier

      it would notice the galaxies

      behind my eyes


      but my body is




      in the warm


      Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂


      @emma-starr Lovely my friend. I adore the image of the galaxies stored behind eyes. <3


      @evelyn Thank you!! That’s one of my favorite images too. :)))

      Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂

      Knowledgeful Butterfly

      We alone did face

      The night within.

      A lonely shroud,

      Like an empty dream.


      A foreboding shadow

      Of flowered, unseen truth

      Echoes with cold & silent fear

      And screams like our bitter sky.


      Broken  lightning,

      But whispered thunder

      Dread between unknown confusion,

      Which murmurs through young power.

      i could've gone outside to take a walk, but i know that i wouldn't've come back


      @e_elaine_soup5 Cool poem! 🙂 I especially like the images in the last stanza. “Broken lightning” and “whispered thunder” = perfection.

      For feedback… “We alone did face” seems a little awkward to me, unless you’re trying for an old English type of vibe. “We faced the dark alone” is a lot easier to read/follow.

      Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂

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