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  • #57410
    A Kitchen Sink
    @hgm_barnes18

    So, I like to experiment in my poetry. Poetry is one of my favorite things to write, it just flows so easily sometimes from my thoughts; this is one of my experimental, free-verse poems, inspired by some other amazing poems.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hkJHYRoMhGtgGp_acC3Pon0PRtLF4c80EYXCg-_Vegs/edit?usp=sharing

    "If you called out to the void loud enough... hard enough... would the void answer back?"

    #57436
    I, David
    @i-david

    10/10, would read again.

    Four
    INFP
    songwriter

    #57526
    Ariel Ashira
    @ashira

    @hgm_barnes18 I like it!  the flow was pretty good.

    Is it based on something that happened to you?

    "No matter how much it hurts, how dark it gets, or how hard you fall, you are never out of the fight."

    #57544
    Grace
    @h-jones

    <p style=”text-align: left;”>That’s such a great poem! I like how you compared loss to the feeling of missing your keys or something being stolen, like something is always wrong but you can never get to the bottom of it. Great comparison.</p>

    Secretly Hedgehog Jones. Don’t tell anyone.

    #57782
    A Kitchen Sink
    @hgm_barnes18

    @i-david Thanks, Lo. 🙂


    @ashira
    Thanks! Nope, kinda just from my imagination. Thankfully.


    @h-jones
    Thanks for reading it! (It’s also shorter than the last two, so that’s good, heh.) Thanks for noticing that comparison, too.

     

    "If you called out to the void loud enough... hard enough... would the void answer back?"

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