@thetessinator This is really good! You seem to have decent grasp on proportions, and the characters are very expressive! Honestly I’m not really sure there are any quick or little things that could be changed to make this better. Everything I can think of involves long term practice.
I guess the coloring on (most noticeably the man’s pants) is a little uneven.
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