February 4, 2020 at 2:23 pm #105261
That could be a cool idea, (about the rebel group). I don’t know if anyone else had plans for Cade’s assistant
Sold souls and dead promisesFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:24 pm #105262
Alrighty. Are you still in this thing?
Sold souls and dead promisesFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:27 pm #105263February 4, 2020 at 2:31 pm #105264Naiya Dyani@naiya-dyani
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Wherever Kedori thought it was lol XD
I was thinking maybe in some kind of unsuspected, abandoned spot like a basement in a ruined building? But I’ll let others pitch in their opinions.
By the way, I’m going to be gone for a while after this to get my schoolwork done. 😉
Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.February 4, 2020 at 2:32 pm #105265
Sold souls and dead promisesFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:35 pm #105266Esmeralda Gramilton@esmeralda-gramilton
An assistant. . . Nope, none of my characters are that responsible (just kidding, I mean no-one I’m bringing in)
Anyways, @urwen-starial, humor is great. You know me. You know how often I make such references and jokes.
Everyone, those are great ideas. All of them: the treasury burning thing, the Beta 7.9 thing, the symbols thing.
Maybe the good rebels should be sparrows (small and good at hiding and surviving alone, but (and if you live in the country like me I’m sure you’ve seen this) they are excellent defenders of their territory. I have literally seen one chasing off a hawk by itself once before).
Then the bad rebels. . . I don’t know, a rook? (a gregarious Eurasian crow with black plumage and a bare face, nesting in colonies in treetops, and (as a verb) means to defraud, overcharge, or swindle (someone).)
out loudon keyboard.
Also, yay, Cade!
“No-one can judge your worth; They can only influence your judgement of your own worth.” ~ElyssoFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:36 pm #105267
Here’s what I wrote out last night, hope you like it!
<p style=”text-align: center;”>****</p>
Kirat raced through the streets, his jacket hood thumping against his back.
He was getting tired from running, it became apparent that the officials were desperate to catch him.
Soon after the chase began, a bunch of other people joined in the chase. Several young men, more officials, a woman with a baby in a sling, and an old lady carrying a cat. Even though he was in a desperate situation, Kirat couldn’t help but marvel at what a scene this was.
A blur of red and orange flashed by Kirat, and he suddenly realized how tired he was. His breathing was shallow, as he struggled to keep up his pace, not enough oxygen was getting to his brain. His vision darkened, as his brain began shutting down, his foot caught on something, and he sprawled onto the stones of the street.
Hands seized his arms, and began dragging him away, his last thought before he passed out was: I’ve failed.
<p style=”text-align: center;”>***</p>
Veraza, I’ve got it set up so Talia can be the one who helps him out, if you’d like, or Kirat could just go to wherever they take prisoners. XD
“Tears sparkle like fallen stars, the world at our fingertips, We didn’t know, It wasn't happiness.February 4, 2020 at 2:38 pm #105268February 4, 2020 at 2:39 pm #105269
LOL XD I know what you mean about sparrows!!!
I think a rook would be awesome for the bad rebels.
Sold souls and dead promisesFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:40 pm #105270
Cool!! Good work!!
And yeah, that does sound like a good idea.
Sold souls and dead promisesFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:40 pm #105271Esmeralda Gramilton@esmeralda-gramilton
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Thanks! 🙂
“No-one can judge your worth; They can only influence your judgement of your own worth.” ~ElyssoFebruary 4, 2020 at 2:42 pm #105272February 4, 2020 at 2:44 pm #105273
OOOOOHHHHHHH. That’s really cool!!!!!!! *squeals in excitement* This is so fun! Maybe use a different word instead of “house.” I like Knot House, not saying no, just wondering if there’s something that works better.
“Tears sparkle like fallen stars, the world at our fingertips, We didn’t know, It wasn't happiness.February 4, 2020 at 2:45 pm #105274Mayacat@mayacat
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer I love that!
I do not write the story... the Universe writes the story and I am simply its messenger.February 4, 2020 at 2:47 pm #105275
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