December 12, 2019 at 10:38 pm #102622
Well they’re actually from two different stories. 😛 Zane, Eina, and Keldan are from The Red Rider, and Talia, Wisteria, and Zerach are from The Flewling. (Both titles are WIPs. Heh.) If you really want to, I can give you the link to some of The Red Rider. It’s very messy, as it’s NaNoed and unedited, but… *shrugs* oh well.
Heh. Yeah… Eina’s a violent child. An angerful little whirlwind of vengeful short person, if I do say so myself. XD But at least Gerik isn’t permanently injured?December 12, 2019 at 11:22 pm #102623
@kari-karast *shrugs* I mean, it’s not like he wouldn’t deserve it. Besides, I don’t need him for my plot anymore, anyway! 😛
Gerik: *yells at me in Aboreil*
Kedori: *walks up to him calmly since he can’t hear him and stuffs an old sock in his mouth*
That should shut him up for a while. Hopefully. 🙂
P.S. Ooh, angerful little vengeful whirlwind of short person. . . sounds like an inspiring archetype to me! 😀
- This reply was modified 2 years, 8 months ago by Naiya Dyani.
Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.December 12, 2019 at 11:32 pm #102625
@naiya-dyani *chuckles* Well, it’s probably good anyways.
*laughs* Indeed. Just don’t get on her bad side.December 13, 2019 at 12:30 pm #102637
@kari-karast Listen, I’m the second tallest in my family at 5’4″. I’ve learned that small size just means everything is more concentrated. XD
Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.December 13, 2019 at 1:11 pm #102641
@naiya-dyani Agreed. I’m the 2nd tallest in my own fam, too, actually. (At 5.6 though.)December 13, 2019 at 7:48 pm #102659
@naiya-dyani *grins* Yeah… no. Not particularly.
Lol! Ok! 😛
“Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"December 13, 2019 at 7:50 pm #102660
@kari-karast Ooh! Yes please! And I don’t mind reading unedited stuff lol. Mine is… messy, to say the least XD
“Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"December 13, 2019 at 11:20 pm #102668
Okay, here you go! Please ignore the lack of a chapter 2. I couldn’t decide where to start it. XDDecember 14, 2019 at 10:11 am #102681Kayla Skywriter@kayla-skywriter
Well, here it goes.
Lonan: Thievery because he needed to find his sister
Lloyd: It’s illegal for him to be alive, sort of. But he also works as a spy a little.
Pembe: She probably interfered with an election, maybe for fun.
Hari: He defiantly stole something. He is a street rat after all.
Farran: He blackmailed a high ranking Nobel, because Pembe told him to.
Tawny: She started a revolution, so that maybe there could be a legal system again.
Azahar: Burned down several buildings, it was an accident.
Alex: Maybe he did a U-turn once?
Jayden: He is literally a super-villain.
Jane: Um… I can’t think of a crime she’d do. And I bet if she did it she wouldn’t be caught.
How we chose to fight is just as important as what we fight forDecember 14, 2019 at 12:53 pm #102691
@kayla-skywriter *wheezes* Maybe did a U-turn once. . .
Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.December 14, 2019 at 3:03 pm #102706
@kari-karast I read a few pages of it, and it’s great so far!! Very interesting and intriguing. 😀
“Enough! Be quiet! I can’t hear myself think! I can’t hear my teeth chatter!"December 14, 2019 at 3:08 pm #102708
@kari-karast Do you mind if I read it too? I mean, if I can find time. 😛
Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.December 14, 2019 at 5:05 pm #102722
@anne_the_noob14 Thank you!
And oh my gosh I completely forgot again. *facewalls* I’m just gonna put a bit of a content warning on it cuz of death and violence. I try really hard not to describe it in detail, but the MC/narrator does watch someone get killed and it’s implied that a ton of other people die too. I’m sorry, I forget the content warning every single time I give someone the Doc. *sigh* Maybe I should just put it on the Doc itself…
And if that means that neither of you can read it anymore that’s totally fine! I won’t be offended.December 14, 2019 at 5:09 pm #102724
@kari-karast I feel ya! I mean, I’d only really know once I got into it, but I’m usually okay with some violence in written form. I mean, I did kind of just kill two of my characters with swords, so I’ve only got so much room to talk anyway. . . 😛
Hearts are like matter--they can be beaten down, torn, and burned, but they cannot be destroyed.December 14, 2019 at 5:18 pm #102725
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