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    Buddy J.
    @wordsmith

    @storyjoy

    I get slightly disappointed in myself when I lose a competition, because I’m always wanting to get better, and I tend to think that I could have still won. #hindsight2o2o

    And I think “Hmph” would be more correct because of the nature of vowels. The vowels are all sounds you can say without creating a stop in your mouth or throat. And “Hmph” is a way of reply without opening the mouth at all, and thus not using any vowels. So to put a vowel in would be to contradict the nature of what you’re saying. ๐Ÿ˜(That was fun to write out)

     

    Published author, student in writing, works with HazelGracePress.com

    #45250
    storyjoy
    @storyjoy

    @wordsmith Yup, exactly. And then hours later I think of a great comeback. xD

    YEASSS *highfive* XDD That’s the word my friend and I always argue about, and she says it’s Humph. It’s not. Hmph. XD

    *cartwheels out*

    #45251
    Buddy J.
    @wordsmith

    @storyjoy

    The perfect comeback that never seems to work when you have another chance with them… ๐Ÿคฃ

    Aw man! I’m glad that you agree… but I was kinda hoping for a debate๐Ÿ˜†. (At least you are of the right standpoint)๐Ÿ˜œ

     

    Published author, student in writing, works with HazelGracePress.com

    #45254
    storyjoy
    @storyjoy

    @wordsmith

    LOL! Yup XD

    LOL Sorry to disappoint XDD

    *cartwheels out*

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