August 27, 2018 at 5:54 pm #45135
So I’ve really wanted to know how good my writing actually is. 😛 So I put a few of my favorite clips (that don’t contain spoilers) on a Google Doc in hopes someone’s willing to read them and tell me what you think… 😛
I’ve included a few sentences explaining the context of both clips, so hopefully it’ll make sense. 😀 Also, it *might* help to read the premise of my book on my profile. 😛
You can comment on the doc, or you can comment on here. Either way, I’m fine with. 😀
I’d love to hear what you both like and dislike about my story… but don’t worry about being super polite if you find something wrong. I like brutally honest people. 😉 xD
Anyway, here’s the link to the Doc:
*cartwheels out*August 27, 2018 at 7:22 pm #45149Princess Foo@princess-foo
@storyjoy I made some comments. I thought it was really great! Seriously. I know you said you like honest people, and this is me being honest. Both clips made me want to keep reading.
The cake is a lie. acaylor.comAugust 27, 2018 at 7:24 pm #45150
@princess-foo Thank you so much!!! =)) *goes to look at your comments*
*cartwheels out*August 27, 2018 at 11:36 pm #45206
Joy! I read your snippets and really enjoyed them. The comments I left were not those of one disappointed, but one very happy to play a role in giving advice.
In all things please remember this: Advice is free and you don’t have to take it. 😃
Have fun with your writing!
Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!August 28, 2018 at 8:54 am #45215Parker Hankins@parker
@storyjoy, I’m not scared to tell you what I think!! I’ll be sure to critique it.
Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.August 28, 2018 at 8:54 am #45216
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! 😀
Haha, yup! And you remember that I really do appreciate your comments even if I don’t agree XD Part of one of the MBTI personality types that I’ve gotten told me that “So long as everyone understands not to take their words too personally, anyone who isn’t afraid to discuss new ideas – and have them converted into so much confetti – is likely to find stimulating and thought-provoking friends in you.” And that is totally me. XDDDDD
*cartwheels out*August 28, 2018 at 8:55 am #45217August 28, 2018 at 9:20 am #45227Parker Hankins@parker
@storyjoy, My pleasure!
Living in a world of mystery and dangerous predicaments while working with the AWESOME Meraki's.August 28, 2018 at 9:42 am #45229
So… I’m not a huge fan of the MBTI, but I will tell you I think I relate with an ENTJ…
That being said, I am an extroverted who really enjoys debate and such kinds of discussions. I really enjoy talking with people about the nitty gritty of writing, and also critiquing on a sentence by sentence level.
Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!August 28, 2018 at 9:58 am #45233
Oh, okay. 😀
That’s neat 😀 Yeah, I love debates too, except when I lose them. XD I don’t know which personality type is the most competitive, but whatever it is, that’s what I am. 😛
*cartwheels out*August 28, 2018 at 10:04 am #45235
One way you might describe me is not afraid of conflict. I will run into conflict without realizing it’s conflict, even though I want to deal with the conflict… It’s a little complicated.
But I am highly competitive.
Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!August 28, 2018 at 10:08 am #45236August 28, 2018 at 10:12 am #45237
@wordsmith Haha, that’s interesting! 😛 For me, if I find someone close to me disagrees with me on anything (even on the spelling of a nonexistent word, yes that’s an actual debate me and my best friend have all the time), I’m going to try to debate them and change their mind. XD
Ah, that’s interesting! Of the ones I just now read, I’m definitely ESTJ in the competition regard. 😛 😀
*cartwheels out*August 28, 2018 at 10:31 am #45243
Anyone who debates with me will probably say I was trying to get them to change their view. Because I do that… And yes, I can so understand arguing about how to spell an nonexistent word (you gotta start somewhere…)
Yeah… I am not super competitive in the way an ESTJ is. I probably have a high pain tolerance, so it might take more to make me stop, but I don’t get aggressive just for competition.
Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!August 28, 2018 at 10:36 am #45244
Lol, yup. xD By the way… this is totally random, but I must know… Do you spell it Hmph or Humph? XDDD
Lol! I cannot stand losing anything (though I will pretend like I totally don’t mind) soo…. but yeah. I’m the kind of person who has to be the best in everything or else I’m not happy. Which basically means I’m never happy. *facepalm* XD JK, it’s not that bad… yet…
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