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  • #101655
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    <p style=”text-align: left;”>@jenwriter17 thanks! !</p>

    #102204
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @michelle Okay! NaNoWriMo is over for me, so I am going to start reading over your book, like requested. 😉 Do you want comments left in the doc?

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102209
    Michelle Rose
    @michelle

    @jenwriter17 Oh thank you so much for remembering! it means a lot:) Do you need me to send you the book again? and yes, I would love comments! but just about what you think of the story:)

    #102210
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @michelle 😀 No, I found the link again. 🙂 Okay!

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102278
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @michelle Okay, I finished your story! 🙂 I love it; it’s such a sweet book and I found myself chuckling several times. <3 I don’t really have any suggestions (but I’m not really that experienced with children’s stories), and I thought the grammar and spelling and formatting and such was really good. Were there any other questions I was supposed to answer?

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102280
    Michelle Rose
    @michelle

    @jenwriter17 Thank you so much for taking the time to read it! I’m glad you enjoyed it:) and thanks for the comments. I do have one question. Which character did you like the best? 🙂

    #102296
    Selah
    @selah-chelyah

    @katthewriter

    *tacklehugs*

    Kat! Great to see you here! I love that cover so much. 🙂 I haven’t been on here a whole lot lately, so I didn’t see your tag until just now.

    Assistant Guildmaster of the Awesome Meraki
    ~ Created to create ~

    #102309
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @michelle I think I would say either Al or Eddy. 🙂

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102319
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    @selah-chelyah *hugs* thank you!

    And @jenwriter17 ack! Sorry i haven’t got they link to you yet,  I’ll try to send it asap. It’s just a bit crazy here

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    #102328
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @katthewriter

    That’s fine. 🙂

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102346
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    @jenwriter17

    I sent you the link.  II’m not a very good writer btw

    #102347
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @katthewriter

    Thanks! I’m sure it’ll be great! 😀

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102669
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17

    @katthewriter Hello! I just finished reading your story. I really enjoyed it, especially that prologue! I would’ve left comments in the document, but I don’t know much about Word so I couldn’t figure out how XD But anyway, the biggest tip I would have would be utilizing the ‘show don’t tell’ rule and cutting down on needless words to make the story more tight and powerful. 😉 Thanks again for letting me read it! 😀

    "If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
    www.jennaterese.com

    #102702
    Michelle Rose
    @michelle

    @jenwriter17 Thanks again so much for reading it!!!!!

    #102715
    Katthewriter
    @katthewriter

    @jenwriter17
    <p style=”text-align: left;”>Oh yah like i could do SDT like in that scene where X392 is getting beat up, but yes i know the last chapter i wrote is terrible.  Because I’ve never written i fight scene other than a character getting beat up,  but i procrastinated to write that. ..for 6 months. .. until someone convinced me its better to have a bad fight scene i can murder edit later than no scene at all.  </p>
    Also i think i gave you a just view one cuz i don’t do wordy edits while I’m still writing it….

    But thanks.  But you don’t have to say it’s good even if it’s not.

    Do you want to read more when i have more so i should put you on am email list or hangout group?  If not that’s fine.  It’s not gonna be that great

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