- This topic has 59 replies, 13 voices, and was last updated 1 month, 1 week ago by
.
-
Posts
-
@jenwriter17 Oops. I was gone all day and didn’t see this. But yes! What you did was great! 🙂
Fantasy/dystopian/sci-fi author. Mythology nerd. ENFP. Singer.
@jenwriter17 Okay, thank you! I’ll e-mail you. 😀
"But how could you live and have no story to tell?" - Fyodor Dostoyevsky
Wow, Jenna, you are amazing! Time to beta read, and looking for things to read, instead of swamped like 99% of us are on here? XD
I’d love for you to read the first 5 chapters of my book that I have finished, if you’d like to. Historical fiction, and the first 5 chapters deal a lot with 9/11. 🙂 If you want to read it, I’ll have to send you a link since it’s closed access. I just checked… it’s about 19,000 words.
Assistant Guildmaster of the Awesome Meraki
~ Created to create ~@jenwriter17 I dont need a beta…yet.
BTW your profile pic is so totally adorable!
"No matter how much it hurts, how dark it gets, or how hard you fall, you are never out of the fight."
@selah-chelyah Okay, awesome! Yes, I’d love to read it! 😀
@ashira Thanks! @mariposa did it! 🙂
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.com@eden-anderson Sounds good!
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.com@jenwriter17 you must have some top-notch time-management skills!
I don’t have anything ready at the moment, but thanks for tagging me anyways. 🙂 I have a feeling post-NaNoWriMo there’s going to be a bucketload of beta requests haha.
@corine Well, I try, lol. 😀
Okay, you’re welcome! Yes, that is true!
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.comMaauvelous…can you email me at needleworksbyselah@gmail.com and I’ll send it to you? 😀
Assistant Guildmaster of the Awesome Meraki
~ Created to create ~@selah-chelyah Okay…I emailed you. 🙂
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.comHey Jenna! I hope you don’t mind my adding on to this thread so long after its original posting!
Here is a short story I’ve written that I’d love to have your thoughts on…if you have time, of course!
By the way, your blog is absolutely lovely! 🙂
"‘What! You too? I thought I was the only one." C.S. LEWIS
@wisdomofprose Hi! No, I don’t mind. 🙂 I’d love to read over your story!
Aw, thank you! 😀 <3
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.com@samantha-pen @jenwriter17 @selah-chelyah @ashira @wisdomofprose @r-m-archer @eden-anderson @evelyn @therealameliahoch @the-fledgling-artist @itisastarrynight @h-jones @chalice @k-a-grey @seekjustice @scarletimmortalized @valtmy @rochellaine @tinuviel @caseybold @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @abigail-rebekah @anne-of-lothlorien @bella-d @livgiordano @lillian-parks03 @toklaham-veruzia @faith_blum
Hello everyone! It’s Michelle (AKA
Michelle Black @michelle ) I’m back from the dead to be with you guys here today lol *dusts off dirt and moss then acts perfectly normal like nothing has happened* XD Some of you know me and some of you don’t. Sometimes I’m on here.. not really often. But hey, you gotta live, you know?
I tried to tag everyone I could think of but if anyone I didn’t tag also wants to read, please do so:)
Anyway I just finished my full length book!! Well to be more accurate, a chapter book for kids in 3rd and 4th grade. It is 5 chapters and 6k words and I would LOVE some feedback on:
– Flow
– Grammar
– Do you think it’s publishable?
– Does it keep your interest?
– Who is the most relatable character?
– BONUS – If you have a younger sibling in grades 3 and 4 please read this to them (or have them read it) and give feedback.
Thank you so much guys!
Here is the doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w9Tj5_RImpZl61iZAdlJ1uSYp5eRatp_1zkoRG-aoeM/edit?usp=sharing@michelle First, congrats on finishing your book! That’s always exciting. 😀
Second, since it’s NaNo, I don’t think I’ll be able to take on anymore beta reading (I’m already reading through another story), but I think I’d probably be able to in December if that’s not too late?
"If you want to change the world, pick up your pen and write." -Martin Luther
www.jennaterese.com@jenwriter17 Are you sure? I forgot to mention the story is not long, you can read it in less than a day:) but if you want to read it in December than I will hit you up on it than.
PS. This goes out to everyone. I forgot to add this in my post lol The book is not long to do the things that it does, you can finish it in less than a day, actually less than 30 or fifteen mintutes. A juicy detail I should have added before:)
You must be logged in to reply to this topic.
