June 25, 2018 at 9:45 am #39824
Just a poem, that was a mixture of thoughts when i had writers block. This is the first poem i wrote.. so.. i’m not sure how good/bad it is.
I sat still starring at the blank page in front of me.
A pen in my hand.
Anticipating to write something Wonderful.
I have so much in my mind but outwardly so little.
But I want to writer, I need to write.
I gripped the pen harder and put it near the paper.
And waited for something to come to my mind.
But all the filled my mind was Fear.
Fear that it wouldn’t be Wonderful.
Fear that it wouldn’t be Inspiring.
Fear that it wouldn’t be Beautiful.
Fear that even if I poured my time and love into it that it wouldn’t be anything.
Anything good, Anything worthwhile.
The only good of it to be crumpled up and thrown away.
The work the pen and paper helped me with ruined.
With my hands shaking I closed the pen and sat it down.
The blank piece of paper blurring as my eyes filled with tears.
I couldn’t do it.
I had failed.
I got up and walked away.
An empty feeling sank into my stomach.
I failed being a writer.June 28, 2018 at 11:08 pm #40125Jane Maree@jane-mareeJune 29, 2018 at 9:20 am #40148
Hm.. you sure? And you arn’t just saying that because i mentioned about it being horrible, and your trying to make me feel better, even if it’s not really true?
Yeah.. when i wrote it i didn’t know it was a poem, but a yduber friend told me it was a poem. *shrugs* poetry is not really my thingJune 29, 2018 at 10:36 am #40155Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr)@emma-starr
@katthewriter That was SO cool! I’ve never thought of writing a poem about not being able to write a poem. And the phrasing was so beautiful.
Keep writing poems, girl!!
Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂 https://sevenbillionsmiles.home.blogJune 29, 2018 at 10:37 am #40157Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr)@emma-starr
@katthewriter That’s the magic of free verse. 🙂
Spreading God's love until I can see seven billion smiles. 🙂 https://sevenbillionsmiles.home.blogJune 29, 2018 at 10:40 am #40158
Okay, thank you Emma!
Free verse..? Like i said.. don’t know much about poetry, just try to make it flow right.June 29, 2018 at 12:28 pm #40169Kate Flournoy@kate
@katthewriter I like it! Nice use of repetition. 🙂
INFP-A. If you can't be brilliant, odd will do.June 29, 2018 at 12:30 pm #40170June 29, 2018 at 7:17 pm #40213Jane Maree@jane-mareeJune 29, 2018 at 8:50 pm #40217
Okay, thank you @jane_marree ! =) 😀July 2, 2018 at 1:43 am #40316Jenna Terese@jenwriter17July 2, 2018 at 3:58 am #40318Emily D@emily-d
@katthewriter *sneaks in a week late* Hey Kate! I just saw this. Well done! 🙂 (P.S. Are you a horsey person? Me too!! I love the look of the horse in your profile pic…yours?)
Parimi Alcan. Writer, reader, rider and rebelutionary.July 3, 2018 at 4:12 pm #40502
Thank you @jenwriter17
Ah another horse person!!! Thank you @emily-d !! 😀
Yes, i am a very much horse person, and has been called (so i accept it as i tittle) a Horse nerd.. XD I LOVE Horses! <3 😀 Thank you! He’s a Dapple Grey Quarter Horse. No, he’s not mine, but the horse i’ve been riding for the last couple lessons. (That picture was taken last winter when i was just visting all the horses) How about you? Do you have a horse, or ride? 🙂July 3, 2018 at 4:13 pm #40503
And @gabriellepollack you may or may not have already seen this from when i posted it a long time ago on ydubs.. but also.. *just pulls you over here so i can get a hug* 🙂July 3, 2018 at 4:19 pm #40508
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