Hola! I actually have a story that I believe needs exactly what you offer. I could put in the time… lots of time… to sift through it with my biased mind. But it would be REALLY helpful if I could get another skilled person to help me.
The story has a few problems I know I’ll need to resolve. For instance, there’s one part where I slip from limited to omniscient. If you have any ideas there, they’re welcome… but aside from that, I’d be looking for the clearest text… without losing the feel I’m working with in the prose.
How would you like to beta-read for me? It’s between 4 and 5K… in the setting of Western (cowboy hats) Fantasy. If you could go through it with a fine toothed comb, I’d much appreciate it.
Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!