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Kenzie Pimpo
@banana-peacock-warrior

@w-o-holmes: I loved this poem! I’ll admit that this isn’t my own typical style I write in but I WILL say that it flowed super nicely. All the lines matched up really well and as an admiring poetry reader I was able to do so very easily. Plus, your word choice was beautiful! Nice work! 👍🏻

“When anxiety was great within me, your consolation brought me joy.”
‭‭Psalm‬ ‭94:19‬ ‭