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Gladly!  Real quick, though, is “lang” supposed to be “land”?  The dictionary definition of “lang” doesn’t fit the context.  I’m going to write like you meant “land.”  Feel free to change things if that’s not what you meant.


His head swiveled toward the movement, pinpointing its location.  Two soldiers, enemies of him, were limping along together towards their camp.  They still had a long way to go, and their watchful king may not have spotted them yet.  The warrior felt the hilt of his sword, stroking it with his fingers, considering.  Would they be worth taking out?  He remembered one of those two taking down at least ten of his people, so perhaps it will be worth his trouble…

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