@theresa-play, don’t kill her! I hate it when the little kids get killed. That just ruins a book for me. I mean I’m okay with you killing off older people, especially if they are sacrificing themselves for something, but don’t kill off the innocent little kids, especially the innocent little girl. That’s so nasty. I would never forgive you if you did it. I don’t care what’s predictable. It’s fine to be predictable. You could make it unpredictable how she escapes death. You could make it that one of the people who was going to kill her freed her or something like that, rather than the father. Just find some alternative to her death.
Your story is yours and no one else's. Each sunset is different, depending where you stand. -A. Peterson