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@kari-karast Thank you for your feedback! The ghost part is well…ambiguous…aka I don’t know what I’m doing.


Alright! Thanks!

Thanks for all your comments and answers! Mom always said I was a drama queen, I’ll look into that video! The subtlety and character development answers were helpful as well. I always like it when someone helps me step back and appraise my work. I didn’t feel like explaining the ghosts lol! Thanks for everything again!

“Scarlet, What are you eating?” ~ “Ghost peppers...” ~ Robin sighed.

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