Yes, that does make sense! Thanks. 😀
And yesterday when my mind was thinking about the difference between showing and telling, I took a look at my story (You Reflect Me) and started seeing immediately where I could have shown a whole lot more.
This has been really helpful! I’ll definitely keep playing with second person, but when it comes to contests and such I will remember what you’ve said.
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