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E.B. Raulands
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@andrew
Thank-you so much! I was hoping I could but wanted to make sure. =)
This is a¬†poem I wrote for…a reason that I don’t recall at the moment but am sure it was good at the time.

Toad
Hippity hippity hop!
What a pleasant way to walk!
Hop along the pavement,
Hop around the pond,
Hop among the pansies,
Will I ever stop?
Hippity hippity not!

I’m not sure about the title or the word pleasant in the second line; what do you think?

 

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