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E.B. Raulands
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I was on my way to write a post on “The Crimson Dove” when I stopped to read this. I like the way the rhyme flowed with the short lengths of lines 1-2 and 7-9 but was also a little confused by the chess image in the middle of the poem.

What do you think of changing the word of in the last line to at?

To the glory of God and for the advancement of His kingdom.

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