@carolyn-matthews, *sneaks in a weak late* Your story sounds cool! “)
I’ve killed characters before, or at least the story ends sad. But I don’t know about some of these other WIPs.
How long do you intend to have your story (if you already figured that out yet)? My WIP right now is 12812 words right now, though it will be much longer. I’m planning for it to be a longer story. The point is something along the lines of listen to what people have to say, but don’t do what they do.
You cold use the Pharisees in the Bible for an example. What the Pharisees said was right and true, though they most definitely didn’t always act like that.
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