@The-inkspiller I’m glad I could help! Also, out of curiosity. . . Kyreleis. . . where does her name come from? Because it looks a lot like it could be a contraction of Kyrie Eleison, which given what you wrote about her in the first post is very interesting. Or just an accident?
And good luck with having to end up writing a very different story from the one you started with. It’s risky and can be painful (always keep a back-up copy of the original, please) but can be an immense improvement.