@mnvalentine Thanks for your input; I appreciate it! There aren’t a ton of major characters— just Breen, Josiah, two antagonists, and one of Josiah’s friends. So that shouldn’t be an issue, at least.
As far as reading it goes— I’ll hopefully be looking for beta readers this fall. If you want, I can let you know when that happens. 🙂
Welcome to the masquerade.