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MNValentine
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    @sarah-narnathron Hi! I think it kind of depends on the length of the story. If there are a lot of characters, maybe give Breen another friend to interact with and help. If it’s basically just her and Josiah, I think the way it is sounds fine – she is acting mainly around his needs, but it’s because she loves him and because he is essentially her only friend. I might say differently if the prince was the one doing all the fighting and Breen was completely helpless, but because she actively saves his life, I think it’s okay how it is.

    It sounds like a cool idea, by the way; I’d love to read it! 😀

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