@E-N-Leonard Is the nuking of America and the rising of the Haven back story, or is it in the book? Also, who is a main character? I’m guessing Mara and Jade are the two MCs, no?
What I’m going to do, is get my outline template out and plug your story into it, where it fits, and then we can talk about it–What you need to add or cut or change. Does that sound OK?
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