Ohhh, very impressive of him! (Don’t count on it staying that way XD) I think in her time Liorah only made enemies and a few partners in crime. I don’t know which is worse XD
Nope….especially because I just decided to throw his mortal enemy, Sorren(Okay fine, his “Antagonist”) into the mix.
It’s probably a bad idea to leave him there with Payton…. I can see it already:
First scene: Payton calls him a coward, traitor, liar, a leech on the noblest kingdom ever and when breath and imagination gives out, challenges Sorren to a duel leading to….
Scene 2 in which Payton is lying mortally wounded on the floor of a character castle in the middle of who-knows-where
Partners in crime? XD No the enemies are probably worse….everyone needs a PIC XDXD
It only took one explosion and a few minor injuries on both sides to figure that out, so I call it a success XD
Only one explosion…. that sounds so matter-of-fact XD
He DOES! Liorah has the moral compass of a drunk raccoon so Ferran has to make up for that too. He does have an immensely strong character which is the only reason she hasn’t corrupted him like the others XD Okay maybe that’s a slight exaggeration, Liorah isn’t all bad, she’s just very fun to make fun of XD
Great job Ferran!! Keep her on track!!! (If you can and at your own risk…. XD) I know, I make fun of my characters a lot! Does she change at the end?
LOL, yep, I use way too many placeholders while writing XD Sometimes I’ll not name very minor characters and just write “NAME”
Or this one: “Word here that is sort of like (certain adjective/word) but isn’t and I can’t remember.” And, yes, I have written that all out on more than one occasion. Or ADD A SCENE HERE!!! My other writing fault is that I have at least three notebooks going…and they aren’t all sequential either. One is just scenes that I need to add in somehow later. And then when I go back and type, it can get a little confusing. Just a little….
WHAT DID I MEAN MY “WORD?” OR JUST “ADD A SCENE!?!”
Oh well.
Let me see… Fire, gold, stars, and poppies! She also has wind symbolism every now and then, but not as much as the rest. I think at some point one of the villains calls her “The burning princess” which she was secretly very proud of XD Also, she and Ferran share a lot of symbolism. Ferran is a goldsmith, which shares both the gold and fire symbolism, and poppies are kind of their couple symbolism.
I love the kind of “dual symbolism” between her and Ferran! That’s so sweet!!
Hmmm, just this once XD
XD Just remember, I will come running to his rescue if I have too!!
Nope! GB is my project to just mess around in and experiment! I’m letting some people read it so I know what to work on and learn from it! If you ever feel like reading it, I’ll be happy to share it! The next draft (Third or fourth one) should be finished early next year!
When you finish it, I would like to read it! Do you have a major Christian theme/principle you put in?
