@when-i-see-the-kingdom ahh I see. Well if he doesn’t have a huge role in the story, it might help to give him a smaller/less detailed description when he’s first introduced! I think characters with really detailed/interesting descriptions tend to really stick with the readers more, so if he’s going to be more of a background character, giving him a shorter description could help him not come across as a main character. You could even add on to it throughout his appearances in the story if he appears more, so the readers’ perception of him can grow along with his role in the story 🙂
*laughs as one fey*
