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June 14, 2022 at 2:32 pm
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Emily Waldorf
@emily-waldorf
Alrighty, I might take a look at that book. And yes, that’s what I’m worried about. I’m thinking that playing with tenses like that can easily exasperate a reader.
Could you perhaps skip playing with tenses and just switch persons?
Shall I post the story here?
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