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Emily Waldorf
@emily-waldorf

@noah-cochran

Alrighty, I might take a look at that book. And yes, that’s what I’m worried about. I’m thinking that playing with tenses like that can easily exasperate a reader.

Could you perhaps skip playing with tenses and just switch persons?

 

 

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