If you don’t mind, could you review this new idea and see if it makes sense and is realistic?
Yes, that makes sense! The way you have it it sounds a little dystopian, which is great if that is your genre. Also–and you may already know this–you will need compelling motivation both for Lyra and her family: Lyra needs motivation to run away, and her family need motivation to try and find her.
Quoth the raven, "Nevermore!"
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