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June 3, 2022 at 3:12 pm
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Noah Cochran
@noah-cochran
From everything you added there, Jared’s idea (or something like it) would work far better than mine. However, Jared’s idea makes Kyle far from an antagonist (breaking off a relationship for good reasons is good, not bad), so if you want Kyle to be villainous in some way, then you’ll have to find something bad that causes Kyle to to dislike Andrea’s independence–which is the reason he dumps her, if I’m understanding you correctly.