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Emily Waldorf


I’m assuming Kyle is a really shallow person (I mean, how can he not be with a name like Kyle?😉), so what if it’s a really shallow reason, like the accident deformed part of her face, and he doesn’t want to be seen with her anymore. Or, if he’s a less shallow person, what if she’s really depressed and angry and isolating herself after the accident, and he just can’t handle the negativity.

That first idea was kinda what I had in mind for a while, but I’m not sure now, because she goes blind right away (first 1/4 of the book), and I don’t want him to dump her until the middle. Would it be weird for him to hang on to her for a while and then be like “Yep, nevermind. I actually decided that you’re ugly so I’m gonna break up with you this weekend.”?

Quoth the raven, "Nevermore!"

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